WIP. Any comment on textures? ny idea for hair?

[DKScully]

This is the other side

[leigh]

Hmmm.
Apart from texturing, I have to say that I do think the face is way too symmetrical in the modelling department. You should try and make each side of the face a bit different - maybe move one eye closer to the nose, and the cheeks really bug me.
The tattoo on the one side of the face is quite cool. You still have quite a long way to go though, with the texturing. Play with the specularity, and also a bit of texture in the bump (skin is NOT smooth). Also the colour is too constant - add varying shades eg. pinker cheeks, and different shades around the eyes (although the eyes are mostly hidden by the shades). Look at photos of faces to see how many different hues are on one face.
Good luck!:D

[DKScully]

Yes you're right it's to symetrical... And texture too smooth I'll work more on it.

Thank you very muuuch.

[leigh]

Cool! Keep us posted with updates!:D

[DKScully]

Here's a new little¡¡¡ update

[leigh]

That's looking much better already! Watch out for that black that's creeping into the corners of his eyes.
I think his mouth also needs a bit of work - his lips stick out a bit too much, almost like he's pouting.
Otherwise, you're making good progress!

[captain GUNDAM]

get an anatomy book and check your eye sockets.
they stretch way too far around the side of his head - looks like a mission impossible movie when one of those rubber latex masks are getting pulled off from behind. maybe thats a bit extreme but same difference

[DKScully]

I'm going to fit the eyes now... What about proportions.

Sorry about my english... :-P

This is untextured.

[DKScully]

eyes

[DKScully]

What do u think about hte ear?

[DKScully]

one more

[DKScully]

Well, I think I'm going for hte body now... I'm not too happy with the nose and mouth... But I think I't could work...

Thanks for your critics... But I'd like more.. and more¡¡¡¡ I'm just learning...

[Pancreas]

Yo creo que lo que le falla en la boca es que el labio superior es demasiado grueso, deberías hacerlo más fino hacia la comisura. Los ojos están muy bien, quizá algo hundidos. Yo le haría la quijada un poco más ancha y adelantada para darle más aspecto de matón. :mad:

[chrislomaka]

the ear is way too small. the upper ridge is in the right part, but the bottom needs to come down more. typically, the bottom of the ear should be about level with the lips (draw a horizontal line from the lips around to the back... the ear lobe shuold just touch it).

nice progress, tho. looking good!

[DKScully]

Ey Pancreas, hola. Gracias por tus comentariosss majo. :-))))

Thanks for your comments, I'll try to fit the mouth a little more. I've to do teeth...

I'll fit the ear too. Or I'll try.. :-PPPP

Byez.

[3dflasher]

Me gusta mucho la cabesa, pero todavia tienes problemas pequenos. Ja te dijo algien que tienes que areglar el area del ojo, porque se ve el ojo muy pequeno para el oyo. Los labios tienen que salir mas para fuera, en el medio. El oyido es muy pequeno y tambien la parte que se une el oyido a la cara no es tan definido. Es una tansicion como una rampa /....no se si entiendes lo que quiero decir? Tambien te falta un specular map. Buen trabojo :)

Great job and keep us posted with your progress.

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