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daspetey

06-29-2005, 08:05 AM

hi,
im making a book of 60 portraits. here's one of them. if anybody has time, i'm really looking for some suggestions on what my next steps should be with this one. i know i should probably bring some of the other elements into sharper focus (hair, mouth, nose), but i don't want to compete with the eyes too much..

anyway, i would greatly appreciate any advice. thanks
-pete

daspetey

07-25-2005, 07:55 AM

latest one. this ones a little creepy methinks. face too long?

http://www.daspetey.com/art/p15.jpg
-pete

jkozniewski

07-25-2005, 08:57 AM

Hi daspetey,

I like the first one
(it's definitely better than the second one to be honest...).
What you should do now is to add some details and blend
brush strokes a bit....
Only one crit form me is that her right (our left) side of the face
is too wide in compare with opposite side, which shouldn't occur
in the front view...

daspetey

07-25-2005, 02:55 PM

thanks man.

ya, youre right. the second one is pretty stinky.
i definitely need to make another pass or two at the details in the first one.
i'll repost it when i do.
thanks again
-pete

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