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Luis Arizaga
02-18-2002, 10:46 PM
She's my model for an special woman, she's a runner from an special Labyrinth based on the door of the death, a novel writen by Margaret weis and Tracy Hickman authors of dungeons&dragons.

I will send all the changes, now I'm working on the shoulders hair, textures(I think on illuminated tattoos all over her body as in the novel)and clothes (clothes?:D yeah is a wip).

I would like hear something from Pascal also.:cool: thanks to everybody.

And sorry about my language I will learn more english in the future (I'm form Spain)
Br0nZiLLa
02-18-2002, 11:51 PM
She has some tight ass, yall...

Nice graphics man, this is a nice post
Luis Arizaga
02-19-2002, 12:16 AM
You have reason, I'm working on all she in general, thanks for the coment;) but she is a runner and I can't put a voluptuous ass :D
I will work around with the idea thanks again.

Ah! A thing. Everybody is invited to put his/her animation on my spanish web about 3d animation. I'm working on the search engine now (with php and mysql).
http://www.downstation.com
JacquesD
02-19-2002, 02:03 AM
Nice work.
If i'd say something, I'd say that there may be a problem with hands proportions.

Keep on.
ACFred
02-19-2002, 06:06 AM
Hey there. The model is looking good.

Give her some more definition around the shoulder blades as well as the spine. If she's a runner, she'll have a little bit of bumpiness and detail in the spinal column area. The feet seem a bit wide and flat and the hands look a bit small.

How about showing some detail shots of the feet, hands, torso and head? That way, we'd be able to be more productive in our critiques.

Really nice start, Luis.

Keep up the good work!

Alec
captain GUNDAM
02-19-2002, 08:29 AM
the feet need lots of work, but damb are feet hard - like hands.
secondly the hip area looks blocky and doesn't fit with her other soft features.
cant be sure as i havent seen your mesh but i think you might be using to much geometry in that region
Viper
02-19-2002, 08:29 AM
YO! Runners have thick legs. Hers are thin :)
Matt_Forcum
02-19-2002, 10:35 AM
yeah, id push her muscle structure. give her some really crazy muscles like that eon flux girl. that would rock
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