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Vahn

06-25-2005, 01:51 AM

Its time for me to do something more elaborate again :D

here are two sketches, i did for the DSG last week :

some kind of soldier

http://img226.echo.cx/img226/5055/soldier16dw.jpg

a screaming girl

http://img223.echo.cx/img223/1503/call7fz.jpg

basically my idea is to combine these two and create a big scene out of it....

I like the sketchy linework of the soldier & i like the colors in the girls scene... thats why id like to combine the two somehow....

my first attempt :

http://img132.echo.cx/img132/294/escort10ay.jpg

this will be just a small part of what i have in mind .... i want to add more and more around these two soldiers and get a wide horizontal scene. My first idea is that these soldiers ( & a dozen more ) will eskort a little girl. They are on a planet where the air is polluted by some kind of toxic gas. The girl is the only one who can breathe there without taking any harm and thereby is a key to solve the toxic problem somehow.

i think this will be a longer project, as i got a lot of other work atm ... but i will finish this for sure :wise::rolleyes:

i hope some of you like it :D

c&c very welcome

- Vahn

djtrousdale

06-25-2005, 03:59 PM

The third one: I like the variety of line styles.

I also like the story you have there, with the toxic planet. Keep working on it!

Vahn

06-26-2005, 01:10 PM

i widened the scene and added another soldier.... next step will be adding some kind of vehicle in the bg

http://img61.echo.cx/img61/9653/escort22sd.jpg

Vahn

06-28-2005, 11:37 PM

small update... fixed the soldier on the right & added a Tank :)

http://img112.echo.cx/img112/2825/escort52ij.jpg

does anyone know the game " ICO " on ps2 ? i want my little girl in the white dress a little bit like the girl from Ico .. ( fantastic game btw )

I think she will stand or sit on the tank somewhere ... ill see when i put more soldiers in ...

NOOB!

06-29-2005, 09:15 AM

i thought the screaming girl cud have been a very atmospheric image by iteself.

Vahn

06-29-2005, 11:10 AM

aye noob ...but thats alrdy finished :D

TheFirstAngel

06-29-2005, 11:41 AM

aye cool start. subscribing here as well. the tank looks very promissing. i could picture it in an insectoid design, cuz the flow of it already offers it. cool design, awaiting updates now :)

Arc80

07-04-2005, 01:12 AM

Very nice colours. I can definately see your style in it. The panoramic view is really working. I can't wait to see you add the little girl in the picture. The only thing i can say right now is the sky is a bit saturated from the rest of your colours. Maybe tone it down a bit. It's just a suggestion, hehe. Anyway, i'll keep up with the progress. Goodluck on this bro :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

cheers and peace out :buttrock:

Vahn

07-05-2005, 02:14 PM

hehe im glad you like it & nice to see you :D

oh yeah youre right with the saturation ...ill tweak that when i got the whole scene set up .... might take a while tough as i dont have much time atm :(

StylusMonkey

07-05-2005, 02:33 PM

I suggest you really work on the design of the costumes a lot more, as well as anatomy, line quality, value, color theory and composition.

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Vahn

07-11-2005, 09:53 PM

yeah u got some points there magic man ... but to my defense i have to say, that i will set up the whole scene first before i start going into more detail, colors etc :D

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