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ruxing
10-21-2002, 07:44 AM
http://www.chinadv.com/bbs/photo/2002102115461128913.jpg
say-g
10-21-2002, 08:03 AM
mmm reminds me of fanta, nice car tho but dont u think it has one too many exhaust pipes ?
LordShaitan
10-21-2002, 08:05 AM
Very nice. Just curious, why so many mufflers? No offense but this is a great example where details will make it or break it. I think that not having this tiny details makes it look more "toyish". and the paint is REALLY shinny, not sure if it would be that polished. Gotta love the car models though. Keep up the good work.
ruxing
10-21-2002, 08:52 AM
http://www.51forum.com/bbs/upload_0210/200210211653634504.jpg http://www.51forum.com/bbs/upload_0210/2002102116542023029.jpg
Sorry,the car only for render test,thanks your minds,hehe
LNT
10-21-2002, 11:10 AM
this is an rx7,innit?
stephen2002
10-21-2002, 12:13 PM
:eek: Is that thing rocket powered? So many mufflers....

Glad to see that somebody actually put the time into making an environment for their car.

There looks to be a little bit of sub-surf pinching around the headlights. The tires could use a little bit more detialing. And that thing IS shiny.


Good job overall.
Gluge
10-21-2002, 12:31 PM
Nice shape, I dig that style car 8*)

I think some nice wheels and tires would go a LONG way though!!

other than that, maybe try to tighten up the seems (doors, lights, etc.) ? I know it can be a bastard pain tho hehehe.


I did the color too... and nice surfacing / reflections too 8*)

wheels tho.. new wheels !! it craves them hehee 8*)

keep it up!


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-Barrett Meeker
www.gluge.com
EighthDecay
10-21-2002, 05:45 PM
Damn thats one shinny car,, I kinda like it, the scene looks great also, fix up the headlight, they look like they are melting, keep at it, I'm sure this will turn out great.
flewp
10-21-2002, 11:23 PM
Tires/Wheels: Where's the tread? They also appear a bit too grey, rather than black. I'd also expect a larger tire diameter for a sportier car, it looks like it's got some sub-compact sized tires on there. The wheels also just look like shiny hubcaps. I'd expect something more along the lines of a 6 spoke setup for a car like this. Also, I'd expect it be shaded more along the lines of chrome, aluminum, magnesium, or polished steel.

Exhaust: Uh, well, why so many exhaust tips? That would only add weight. Something you don't want on a sport car, unless it's supposed to be like all those rice-rockets that are more concerned with looking fast, rather than actually be fast.

Details: The car really needs some seams for the hood and trunk. How is one supposed to access the engine or the trunk?

Lights: The headlights appear to be too molded/soft. One would expect them to be more flush with the restof the body. The taillights also seem to be one big piece. There should be some sort of resemblence of a signalling light there at least.

As for the design, I like it overall. However, on a sportier car, one would expect some kind of venting for the front and or rear tires to cool off the brakes and even provide some aerodynamic assistance.
piajartist
10-22-2002, 05:37 AM
Headlights seem very orange and the car looks more orgaincally like clay rather than a 3d model, but it has good qualities dont mis interpret. That is some wax job.
ruxing
10-23-2002, 09:42 AM
thnks yours
LNT
10-23-2002, 10:00 AM
threre are some SSS qualities to this render though,how did you achieve it? :)
ruxing
10-23-2002, 02:23 PM
RE:LNT
I do it with translucency+fast Fresnel:thumbsup:
ruxing
10-25-2002, 07:15 AM
¹þ¹þ£¬UP
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