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BloKHead
06-23-2005, 06:44 PM
Here are some models from a short film I'm working on, you might have seen some of this before.
First is Lana, (non specific lowly working on an army base)
then Morgan (ex-sargent type character).

Looking for advice and crits on everything from design to models and skin shader(bottom pic).
Lana is completely untextured, Morgan's only got diffuse, bump, specular on his face (except in the skin shader picture obviously).

Thanks.


http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/lana/girl.jpg

http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/lana/Lana_Test_002.jpg
http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/lana/Lana_Test_003.jpg
http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/lana/Lana_Test_004.jpg
http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/lana/Lana_Test_005.jpg
http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/lana/Lana_Test_006.jpg

BloKHead
06-23-2005, 06:46 PM
Here are some models from a short film I'm working on, you might have seen some of this before.
First is Lana, (non specific lowly working on an army base)
then Morgan (ex-sargent type character).

Looking for advice and crits on everything from design to models and skin shader(bottom pic).
Lana is completely untextured, Morgan's only got diffuse, bump, specular on his face (except in the skin shader picture obviously).

Thanks.



http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/morgan/morgan.jpg
http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/morgan/morgan1.jpg
http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/morgan/morgan2.jpg
http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/morgan/morgan3.jpg
http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/morgan/morgan4.jpg

http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/morgan/Morgan_Skintest_016.jpg

BloKHead
06-23-2005, 06:49 PM
All done in xsi, photoshop

flashgordon
06-23-2005, 06:54 PM
The Lana model has really nice deformations in the clothing, subtle, not too over-stated. Morgan certainly ate all the pies didn't he, or is he just 'big boned'.

werd
06-23-2005, 06:54 PM
first rule of project mayhem you do not ask questions about project mayhem....haha. I suppose this is in no way related to fight club but I said it anyhow. The models look great and the only thing i can see is the top of the girls leg righ up near the groin should be a bit wider and the gap between the thighs shouldnt be so big. Its lookin good just keep on goin man:thumbsup:

PedramK
06-23-2005, 06:58 PM
Nice models and textures. But think you need to work on the shaders a bit. skin is way to specular and shiny.

BloKHead
06-23-2005, 07:42 PM
flashgordon (http://www.cgtalk.com/member.php?u=114191) ... Thanks

werd (http://www.cgtalk.com/member.php?u=172456) ... jep nothing to do with fightclub. Groin thing well spotted, went and changed it straight away.

PedramK (http://www.cgtalk.com/member.php?u=1743) ... did you mean to sharp (i.e. on the ear and nose) rather than to specular and shiny.


changes to skin.
http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/morgan/Morgan_Skintest_017.jpg

X96
06-23-2005, 07:59 PM
Looks sweet man Post some wire pics plz.

PedramK
06-23-2005, 08:04 PM
Aye, sorry for being obscure in my comments ;)
i ment the effect seemed too strong, as you mentioned, on the ears for example.

BloKHead
06-23-2005, 09:32 PM
Wires

http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/lana/lanawires.jpg



http://mayhem.blokland.org.uk/morgan/morganwires.jpg

casesensative
06-23-2005, 10:08 PM
The proportions on the female are way off.

dmonk
06-23-2005, 10:25 PM
As a whole I think this is coming along nicely!:thumbsup:


I do find something about the females proportions though. Her neck seems short and the lower part of her ribcage seems too low.

I can't wait to see where your going with this!

BloKHead
06-23-2005, 11:28 PM
please be more specific about the porportion thing.

p.s. did i mention it's supposed to be stylised not realistic.

update:
I've moved the breasts up a bit because they looked a bit low from the side, this might help with the rib cage thing

thanks.

nachogrande
06-23-2005, 11:43 PM
These are awesome. I liked the skin texture of him and both clothes.

werd
06-24-2005, 06:36 AM
A few things you could try on the female model: The chest could be a bit wider, actually the whole area around the ribcage could stand to be a bit wider. The curvature of the back is a little overstated and could be toned down a bit. the head should also be enlarged. Its realy hard to say because the style you want could be alot different than what i picture. So im making these comments based on your concept drawing. Overall tho its coming along quite nicely keep it up man:bounce:

BloKHead
06-25-2005, 10:29 AM
Quick Question,
I kinda like the colour swatches on the side of morgans head, what does the world at large think??

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