View Full Version : 3 WIP: want crits please
LouisCho 06-23-2005, 01:37 AM Hey guys (and girls too)
Here 3 of my last sketches I want to know what are you think about it.
If you can give me advice or tips, I should be very happy to receive it.3
Thanks a lot
1- The pipe (René Magrite)
http://xs34.xs.to/pics/05254/Pipe.jpg
2- Ford GT40 MKI
http://xs34.xs.to/pics/05254/Ford_GT40.jpg
3- Sleeping girl
http://xs34.xs.to/pics/05254/nue.jpg
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limion
06-23-2005, 08:54 AM
nice work.
1) (my favorite) i think the mouthpiece is twisted in the wrong direction.
2) the front left weel seems to just be a side, i think you might have forgotten to complete it.
3) not sure about this one, anatomy isn't my strongest point, but i think the chest is a bit wide (almost bodybuilder like 3+) )
still your works are a lot better than i'll ever get em. keep on going.
LouisCho
06-23-2005, 01:39 PM
Thanks limion
1) My favorite too but the only completed at this point
2) I know for the wheels, I had some difficulty to draw them. I will correct it.
3) The chest is effectively too wide, I wanted to make a perspective but I didn't do it good.
Thanks a lot, I will works these points
P.S. Limion your works are very good too, I like your robot
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