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LouisCho
06-23-2005, 01:37 AM
Hey guys (and girls too)
Here 3 of my last sketches I want to know what are you think about it.

If you can give me advice or tips, I should be very happy to receive it.3

Thanks a lot

1- The pipe (René Magrite)
http://xs34.xs.to/pics/05254/Pipe.jpg

2- Ford GT40 MKI
http://xs34.xs.to/pics/05254/Ford_GT40.jpg

3- Sleeping girl
http://xs34.xs.to/pics/05254/nue.jpg

limion
06-23-2005, 08:54 AM
nice work.
1) (my favorite) i think the mouthpiece is twisted in the wrong direction.
2) the front left weel seems to just be a side, i think you might have forgotten to complete it.
3) not sure about this one, anatomy isn't my strongest point, but i think the chest is a bit wide (almost bodybuilder like 3+) )

still your works are a lot better than i'll ever get em. keep on going.

LouisCho
06-23-2005, 01:39 PM
Thanks limion

1) My favorite too but the only completed at this point

2) I know for the wheels, I had some difficulty to draw them. I will correct it.

3) The chest is effectively too wide, I wanted to make a perspective but I didn't do it good.

Thanks a lot, I will works these points

P.S. Limion your works are very good too, I like your robot

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