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rafiadrian
10-20-2002, 05:11 AM
pleaseeee i need the crits

this my only character that many changes from scratch

best regards

RAZ

jbo
10-20-2002, 08:22 AM
from the knee down, she looks like a dr. suess character(lower leg is way too long), but other than that, it's awesome

Frank Dodd
10-20-2002, 11:11 AM
Excellent piece of work very proffesionally modelled. The only two areas that seam problematic to me though are the groin, the space between the thighs looks a little wide!? and certainly the shins are two narrow, the shape of the knees look a little awkward too as if they are angular plates.

In general it looks great though very well done.

Joril
10-20-2002, 11:19 AM
Exelent!
I couln't see any faults that couldn't be covered by the "style" (kinda "dead or alive" style, not photorealistic) of it.
Although she does have very big feet.

insanepoly
10-20-2002, 01:39 PM
The modeling is very well done on the whole, but the upper and lower portion does not mesh well at all, you have a rather photorealistic head and upper body whereas the lower body have a very cartoony proportion and look to them, you should go one way or the other.

PureFire
10-21-2002, 03:37 AM
shes got big feet:eek: ...overall she looks beautiful...very secksi:beer:

yellowworm
10-21-2002, 06:02 AM
awesome. the way the undies grip her crouch is excellently sculpted. i love how she's anime in the body yet real in the face.
it adds total spunk to her.

the feet are a wee bit large.

Kyser_Sosai
10-21-2002, 06:30 AM
Nice model... I think you should have her either in the cotton underwear alone with the boots or texture the under wear the same as the dress and have the boots be a little more formal with a color from her hair.

I just adore the dress, I could swear diesel has something just like it.

[hjd_uk]
10-21-2002, 09:00 AM
Shes got one big fat arse :)

Hehe nah ,its very good. but i agree, the groin area is a bit , um, "open" :S. It look like her hips are too far apert symetrically.

Otherwise very nice - and great clothing modelling. :beer:

oxygen_77
10-21-2002, 02:56 PM
I have to say that the upper body looks fantastic, but the lower doesn't seem to be from the same person... maybe she had leg lengthening surgery and that is why her legs look a bit strange? Well, I still like it, but I think the lower body could be a bit better..

HapZungLam
10-21-2002, 03:33 PM
oh budy, your girl has a greatgreat upper body. are you don't like working on her lower part? there has a huge differents between the 2. i mean, i very like the upper part, especially the face.

I hope you put more detail on the leg, just as you did on the upper body.

rafiadrian
10-21-2002, 10:29 PM
, thats very helped me bro's thanks a lot about
the crits:thumbsup:

she had a leg surgery now hmm. .. a little change but
plus her cloth -- experiment for texture--- it's difficult (must
practice again ):)



RAZ

Kyser_Sosai
10-22-2002, 12:00 AM
The feet are a bit to long women should have nice sweet dainty feet. Not Shaq pieds...

But the outfit is wicked and the sandals

It would be nice the add a little color on the sandals.. but not needed

Frank Dodd
10-22-2002, 04:10 PM
Nice update! That is certainly a improvment over the first excellent image, I do agree the feet do look a long her and I think the knees could do with a tweak the angular caps look a little odd.

Great update. :applause:

HapZungLam
10-22-2002, 07:14 PM
Originally posted by Kyser_Sosai
The feet are a bit to long women should have nice sweet dainty feet.

I don't think it is too long. however, "Long leg chick = sexy" :drool:

CHRiTTeR
10-23-2002, 02:45 PM
Giver her high heels!!! hehehe :rolleyes:

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