Teaser trailer-WWII The Atlantic Massacre

[stephen2002]

pretty good. The CG looked a little bit weak, but teaser trailer style was very good.

[A MacVey]

thanks! yeah hey those are my first shots i've finished so they can only get better right?

[A MacVey]

just a friendly bump

[Loveless]

Pretty nice man. 3d was brief though. Impressed.....and glad to say I'm still the youngest one here ;) <---- 13. I need to learn how to do particle effects.....from your experience, are they hard?

[Biohazard]

Hi.

By watching your teaser, I just wanted to be rude and get back to cgtalk to express that... till I noticed you were only 14. :surprised

Messing with a short is always a quite difficult thing to achieve.
For my own, if I can advice you something : Focus on the story-telling, the important things to show and tell, your technical and artistical bottlenecks. Then work hard to tell your story, whatever the media you decide to use is, even stop motion with sugar cubes.

Putting together early views of the stuff you're working on has only one good goal : Your own motivation (and sometimes, if you don't do pre-prod, showing you your weaknesses and lacks).

That's great to be involved in something like telling a story by using CGs, especially if you're 14. Keep up the good job. :thumbsup:

[A MacVey]

thanks! the two things that I really try to focus on and really try to make good is the sound and the story.

particle effects aren't terrible hard to use, it depends on what you use them for. For those i modified them (like everything else) in after effects

[Grubwyrm]

:buttrock:

Hey Kiddo-

Kudos to you. I've just started, and I can't even try to do anything like that- I'm still modelling. But at 14, with the motivation you apparently have and ambition, by the time you're done with school you should be set. Not the greatest, but a great effort and I commend you for posting.

I'm not in much of a place to critique anything, but I would say the cinemas are way too short and quick. Nice particle effects, but try to get more in there for a little longer. Also, it may have been my viewer, but there was a very grainy look to it.

-Grub:thumbsup:

[LordShaitan]

keep it up. Youll get ther man.

[A MacVey]

thanks a bunch!

i really do hope i get up there! i'm trying my best on this, after all its my first so its my worst! i have MANY, Many more shorts planned, so maybe my dream will come true

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