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2hands
06-17-2005, 09:21 PM
First poses of the walk I'll put on my reel. Just need someone to see something I can't right now. Don't want to move into breakdowns or the deadly spine realm if something's off here. Thanks!

Walk Cycle - Blocked (http://student.vfs.com/~3d53daniel/walk-block2.mov)
jsburakoff
06-17-2005, 10:46 PM
I like the subtle hand motion, I'd be tempted to twist the chest just a tiny tiny bit more, ditto on hips... but that might be overdoing it.

Overall, it's a nice normal walk.
2hands
06-18-2005, 12:24 AM
Thank you, I'll experiment with the extremes a bit more, I want to keep it nice a sublte, but I also want it to have a touch of life/flavour.

Thanks for the comments...
feebsicle
08-25-2005, 09:03 AM
the problem is that his milkshake doesn't bring all the boys to the yard.
Hyphen
08-25-2005, 09:25 AM
looks good to me, but i'd add a tiny bit of a pivot into his hips. the walk seems a bit stiff to me. not too big of a jolt, but a little twist in his hips and shoulders.
adam-crockett
08-25-2005, 07:53 PM
the problem is that his milkshake doesn't bring all the boys to the yard.
LOL! What?

This is such a great start. I'm having a hard time finding anything wrong with it. Like the suggestions above, I'd say exaggerate it a bit more. Save this one though, make a new copy.

Or use this as a base, and start doing emotional variations, a happy walk, a sad walk, a scared walk.
feebsicle
09-01-2005, 10:47 AM
LOL! What?

This is such a great start. I'm having a hard time finding anything wrong with it. Like the suggestions above, I'd say exaggerate it a bit more. Save this one though, make a new copy.

Or use this as a base, and start doing emotional variations, a happy walk, a sad walk, a scared walk.

its ok, it was just a joke. see, i know this guy. so i'm allowed to say ridiculous things to him.
adam-crockett
09-01-2005, 06:53 PM
its ok, it was just a joke. see, i know this guy. so i'm allowed to say ridiculous things to him.

I figured as much. I dont get it, yet it was still really funny!
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