My first character animation

[FabioMSilva]

wanna know why no one commented it yet? :\ it's because u're using that rapid share thing, and it just takes too much time to get your file. ppl in cgtalk are really really lazy, so u should do something about it. another host phearhaps?


cheers

[pollywoggles]

I like this piece. Great overlap going on. On the initial fall, you might be able to delay the shoulders going down just a little longer, to really define that overlap against the hips. I'm also thinking that, since you're using a snappy style, you might transition a few frames faster between the straight (and sometimes reverse-C) and the "C" shape in the arms. Really fun to watch.

[jsburakoff]

Nice work! When he falls into frame, if he dropped way lower, it'd still read and he'd have more impact.

[FabioMSilva]

i see u followed my suggestion :) and the comments start pouring in :D

it's really nice animation. I think it lacks a bit of weight, but i dunno if this is how he was supposed to be...well he seems like a pretty light characters so i guess it's ok :)

[Capel]

looks a lot like an animation i've seen before where a superhero falls into frame and hits pretty much the same poses you're doing here, just better. i'd say in the future try to be a bit more original.

[penartist26]

good start man' one comment perhaps u should make some frontal pose at your character not only sideview angle' good job anyway

[kOmoo]

LOL, i like the poses he goes true, its to short.

[cassanunda]

Thanks for comments and critics :)
To Capel: Yes You are right.. I saw this kind animation on net somewhere.. but I forget where. And I'd like to achive the same kind of look of my animation.
Animation is too short, indeed. It is my practice animation.. From about 2 month I'm learnig Maya and character animation. Currently I'm working on next animation and trying to intensify my knowledge about rigging process.

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