CGTalk - WIP Gate project

raphinounet

06-15-2005, 06:40 PM

Hi all ,i'm begining and i have a 3d project in 3dsmax , i want to put on this gate a man like the poster of the movie "a man apart" , i want to have your opinion on this begining of picture , and i want to know how can i delete the effect of blur when texture are far from camera.Thanx

http://img29.echo.cx/img29/7025/rendu66nt.jpg

matty2x4

06-16-2005, 10:37 PM

ok, my sugestions would be.
Make the big red pipes thinner and the grey cables coming off them thinner. If this looks weak just ad more grey cables. Just make some sort of device that attaches the grey cables to the red pipes, it dosent have to be the most complex thing in the world just a slightly modafied cylinder would do. The big red structure needs more work... search the net for bridge structures, reference is the key! Oh and same for the street lamps they look a bit off scale. And lucky last, duplicate the pipes and cables coming out the far side of the red structure. As for the texture, sorry I dont know Max
keep at it.
Matty2x4

Heshmat

06-17-2005, 03:28 AM

Hey, the road texture seems over the top, maybe tone it down a bit.
Also as already mentioned it does seem that the proportions are all out of whack. You should find some good references to help with this. Also some sky wouldn’t hurt even just a temp one.

Good luck.

chenga

06-17-2005, 03:46 AM

Hi there! I think the road is kind of too reflective...xcept is after rain. And, try to break the repeated texture of the road and its seam.

All the best.

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