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flewp
10-18-2002, 08:54 AM
Well, not much to say. I stopped working on this scene awhile ago, and it's as far as I think I'll take it.

What do you all think?
Frank Dodd
10-18-2002, 12:14 PM
Very nice clean, clear and realistic image. Well set and lit. The only thing that distracted me was the leaves on the plants, these definatly need more work.

Very nice image! :D
HapZungLam
10-18-2002, 02:46 PM
very good lighting!!!

you definitly need a ref map to break up the reflections.:bounce:
Freed
10-18-2002, 03:44 PM
Very nice render and lighting.

Maybe just me, but the scale of everything seems weird to me.

The break in the wall and the wallpaper is usually around waist level. And if so, it seems that the table and stools are especially low, so is the hanging plant.
Neo85
10-18-2002, 08:01 PM
really cool works :thumbsup:
I like lightning....:applause:
proton
10-18-2002, 08:05 PM
send that bad boy in to the LW gallery
WarpedMinds
10-18-2002, 08:41 PM
i lubs it :bounce: that stool thats fallen over is bothering me.. but who cares :P
chepe297
10-18-2002, 09:31 PM
I am afraid that I am with WarpedMinds about the tilting stool. It does distract me slightly... but apart from that... excellect work. I like the lighting! :thumbsup:
dmcgrath
10-18-2002, 11:10 PM
You have a really nice render, but I think you should work on it a little bit more.

When it comes to the compostion and the positioning of your objects it is pretty nice. There is a lot of linear motion in the pic. But fortunately it is broken up by the tilted stool.



Now for the CC:

The floor is too shiny, for starters, it looks like everything is hovering above the surface of the floor.
Also the white points are way too high. You need to vary the lighting color a little to keep it from looking so antiseptic. There is just too much white of the same shade here, its kind of distracting.
With the colored lighting, you will need colored shadows as well. Raytracing does this but you still might need to add some very small faint colored lights in the opposite color spectrum.
Lizard Head
10-19-2002, 01:59 AM
Composition is off center ,also,,,, the shadow on the floor caused by the square table top is to harsh,, it shouldnt be there at all with this diffused lighting. If the light source is above the viewer then the shadows from the table top would be accounted for on the wall ( and those look right!!!) so I wonder what light source would cast the shadows on the floor?


But then again Im picky :)
sting
10-19-2002, 04:01 AM
I like it :thumbsup:
stillvapour
10-19-2002, 04:32 AM
nice image.
the shadows are too dark and look colorless IMO.
slaughters
10-19-2002, 04:39 AM
Well,

That image looks vaguely familular. Nice lighting and texturing of the scene.
funnydoodle
10-19-2002, 05:27 AM
nice ! really nice! to improve it, i would suggest that u make the shadows not so dark and hang the pictures higher .... the rest are really good....
funnydoodle
10-19-2002, 05:29 AM
one more thing, the leaves don't have the creases it should have, now it's just flat green colour and the plant could go higher as well
TRi-14
10-19-2002, 06:49 AM
oh, i like the bright lighting...not bad.. not bad...:thumbsup:
Jimzip
10-19-2002, 06:54 AM
A very nice image I think!
I do agree about the height of the pictures and the leaves, but other than that, it's great, well done!:D
dwillms
10-19-2002, 06:59 PM
I like eating in corners too :beer:
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