Robott!

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Could you be more specific about what exact comments you're after. Tell us what's going on and what you're trying to achieve.

The main standout thing at the moment is that the character is 'floating' The way his left foot slides when the right is lifted is unreal. The foot on the ground should be planted firmly. Secondly, when he is standing on one foot his body needs to shift to centralize over that foot otherwise he would topple over. (These notes apply to both times he stands on one foot.)

Hope that helps as a start. Let us know what you're actually going for and what specific advice you would like.

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