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tinati

06-13-2005, 04:37 AM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/gallerycrits/103081/103081_1118637446_medium.jpg

Title: Designer's Room
Name: Farzad Tinati
Country: Iran
Software: 3ds max, VRay

hi
my new work created using 3dsmax6 and v-ray
rendering system.
once i've posted this work on discreet website
and recieved comments,i want to have comments and
critiqes from cgtalk guys too.

Ultimatum

06-13-2005, 07:15 AM

Cool textures,

the DOF is maybe a bit too strong.

- Ultimatum

Amahpour

06-13-2005, 09:08 AM

change the FOV of the camera. it is too blured!!!
other than that good work!!!:thumbsup:

SanderWit

06-13-2005, 11:45 AM

Looks good but the scene looks way too empty, add a keyboard, mouse, some pens, paper etc etc.

Don't get me wrong, it looks really beautifull but just way too empty.

ToddD

06-13-2005, 02:14 PM

I agree with Don_Sandro (member.php?u=160496), you need some items to make it look more beleivable. Maybe a wacom tablet, desktop speakers, post it notes...something like that :) Nice render, nice work, just doesn't feel finished yet.

Todd

tinati

06-14-2005, 12:52 PM

thanks guys for your comments:thumbsup: .i think i must post the main shot of this work,then you can
see more space of the room.:)
http://support.discreet.com/webboard/wbpx.dll/~3dsmax/upload/vr_workroom_02.jpg

vrexplorer

12-03-2005, 09:33 PM

Cos of the mood is realy great i remember the german 60s cartoons.congrats

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