Angel Girl: Battle with the Black dragon WIP. Resurection of the underworld.Plz Crit

[SurfGod69a]

Tried to correct knee cap and arms after comment that they felt "like rubber" also adjusted some color balance still playing around with that. Straightened backround so that it didn't take away from the dynamism of the composition. Let me know what you think! :bounce:
http://img232.echo.cx/img232/7020/angelgirl9copy9qa.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

[ajay1589]

you should also fix the leg that isnt bent as well

i like the overall look but it is kind of confusing because she doesnt seem to be looking in the dragons direction

[SurfGod69a]

This is a closeup of a funerary statue that I put in the grass to balance out the composition. There will be more decorative ornaments like this as the piece evolves.
http://img134.echo.cx/img134/3787/statuedetailcopy3dj.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

:bounce:

This is the latest version of the picture, let me know what you think.
http://img134.echo.cx/img134/3919/angelgirl11copy9bp.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)Its still in the rough but I want to add more narative to it and make sure that my figures are convincing before I move on.

[SurfGod69a]

After not having worked on this for some time to do some studies on the human figure, I came back and gave it a look and decided it was time to add the color balance and put in some additional compositional Elements. I went with the green/red color scheme because it seemed to make the piece more powerful and add some harmony to the otherwise chaotic scene. Im still probably going to edit the angel and the dragon when I have time. Iv'e pulled some references of some old cathedral's to help with the look of the tower in the backround. Well see how it turns out. Let me know what you think!
http://img144.echo.cx/img144/7817/angelgirl12copy2un.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

[SurfGod69a]

...comments? Anyone? :shrug:

[SurfGod69a]

:cry: No comments? Is it really that Bad. Jeez. Tough crowd

[Matellis]

hey this is looking really nice. I like how it is busy with characters. keeps your eye wondering around the whole pic. good work so far.one thing thou , the girls leg that is touching the ground have a very weird bend to it, maybe if you straighten out thr front of it from where the knee starts and down it would help. cant wait to see the final

[SurfGod69a]

Hey thanks, thats the first positive comment Ive had on this piece ever! The guys on concpept art org told me I should start over from scratch (which will probably happen) but thanks for the commentary. Much appreciated.

[Supervlieg]

Overall it looks okay.

You need to look at your colors. Theyre overly saturated, try to work with less saturad colors. Look around you. There actually very little saturated colors around you.

Another thing you could try is to block out your general shapes before you go into detail. This way you can shape the scene more evenly.

Try doing some pictures from photorefs. That will help you get a feel for the right colors.

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