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Uncle-Ox
06-09-2005, 02:47 PM
Ongoing WIP Thread: I'll post WIPs in this thread as they become available.
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Hi

At last I've got WIP for your comments, please. When giving comments, please bear in mind that these are singular frames from an animation that I'm busy with. Certain technical aspects such as body part intersections, cloth ripples, high definition textures etc., which are IMO important in stills but which will hardly be noticable during the animation, don't concern me. I'd especially like comments on the overall look and feel of images posted here.

Software used:
3D: Cinema 4D R9 Studio Bundle with Shave & a haircut; MotionBuilder 6
Post: PhotoImpact 8; Media Studio Pro 7 (Mainly just composition and on this first image a slight fix)

OK... So here it is:
http://www.vepsi.com/Downloads/Images/Scene001_Shot01_Hair_Test_01_-_Still_2.jpg
ajay1589
06-09-2005, 02:49 PM
her breasts should be lowered a little...right now they look like they are floating even though she doesn't have that much support

also i think you should round out the eyebrows a little and give her thicker hair
Uncle-Ox
06-09-2005, 02:58 PM
her breasts should be lowered a little...right now they look like they are floating even though she doesn't have that much support

also i think you should round out the eyebrows a little and give her thicker hair

She's wearing a "Nude Bra Pro" :scream: :) :D
ajay1589
06-09-2005, 03:04 PM
hahaha wonderful...they must contain helium too:thumbsup:
tonfarben
06-09-2005, 03:33 PM
Maybe you should work a bit on the shoulders? I mean modelling wise, they are not defined enough, more like a pipe now.
But I really like her eyes! They make her live and that is necessary for a believable character. Good work!
I really want to see the result. You have been working so long on this, especially with the hair-animation.
JIII
06-10-2005, 04:35 AM
I can't seem to load the images, I have tried both firefox and safari :-/...
Uncle-Ox
06-10-2005, 08:45 AM
I can't seem to load the images, I have tried both firefox and safari :-/...

That's really strange. I did have an inexplanable slowdown on my server last night for a while. But here everything seems to download perfectly.
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