Femme Fatales- The Mercenary, Marc Tan (3D)

[gurgur]

its amazing...

[Gangstashers]

Totaaaly! Amazing! :eek:

The only crit i would have is her pose of the legs, her hips bend a bit to much for the way she stands, somehow she would actluy go out of balance and fall (haha) no maby you can chane the pose of the legs a bit. And another thing is the stoned you made looks like they repeat all the time or that the once in the back are bigger then the once on the front.

Or that's just silly me to crit this masterpiece!

4 Stars ^^

Sheherryar

[nachogrande]

Pretty awesome buddy. I love those bullet holes on the visor.

[thE-AzRaiL]

great modeling, great textures on car, good job !!

[arizaga]

could you post the main girl wire please? It's an amazing work also in texturing

[rollmops]

Well done!

Great skin shading and lighting. Simple and deadly efficient!
I just have a problem with her victims. They don't have engough contact with the ground. I mean they look a bit rigid to me.
Anyway 4 stars from me! ;)

edit: PEACE!

[xjgd4321]

Good work ! l like！

[pogomogo]

Excellent work, wires pls:thumbsup:

[nealb4me]

Wiked man, really sexy.

I think you could improve the detail and materials on the boots, mainly hers. The ground also could use some work, it looks very synthetic as is.

It's very pleasing none the less.

[MrPositive]

Wow you see so many characters doing nothing and then bam here's one with a composition...cool.

[ucuk]

Amazing character modeling I like it.

[rhin0]

man i love it..everythin s great, my only crit would be the ground..maybe u should work on it a lil bit more. but i give u 4 stars man.. i just love the grl.great model.:thumbsup:

[Rrenderman]

Wow this work is brilliant... 5 stars...

Could I have the light and render settings? :)

[digital verve]

Good modelling and texturing. Just one crit though. The dead ones lying in the blood don't have any blood on them. They look a bit clean.

[ToddD]

Great work!

I think a little desaturation of the hummer would make the femme stand out a bit more, the palette in that area is a bit similar and flat. Great modeling, materials and render!

[Sephiros9883]

Cool work!

i only have minor crits for it:
it has been already said but you could work her pose a bit: the legs are way too stiif compared to the upper part of the body and the victims look a tad too stiff
you could also use a little DOF, as it's a bit disturbing to see the hummer as clearly as the girl

good work though!!:thumbsup:

[DerMeister]

looks really great man. wow...

[cecio]

very good job! no crits from me!

[Lautreamont]

amazing work. my only crit is the accessories of the bodies looks too clean. four stars

[leftyfallat]

Wow! I love everything from the modeling, texturing, lighting, and concept. The only critique I have is that the blood looks a little dull. Maybe add some spots of shyniness and reflectivity in there. Great Job.

[koncz]

One another great modelling work on this scene:thumbsup: , i really like her body and pose:thumbsup:


Georges. ;)

[satch919]

Thats badass! The character reminds me of Sarah Conner from Terminator 2. Too cool.

[NeptuneImaging]

Hey, the model looks very well done. She could be a cast in my film, but I do agree about the dead bodies. They need to be more relaxed and bloody.

[TiskO]

W.....o.....w...!

[Cyborgguineapig]

Please please reconsider having other bodies lying on the ground other than replicated models. This has so much more potential I think. Also turn the hummer wheels slightly and give the ground a lttle more work, irregularity, ect.Also since its the desert I think it would be okay to add a little more specularity to her skin to show slight sweat. maybe paint in some far backround elements. Then resubmit, I really like this one.:) Your not gettin another cg award that easily this time:thumbsup:

[Kid-Mesh]

Ok this piece is just amazing but one main crit....I would have at least changed the uniforms of the dead soliders because it looks like she went rogue and took out her own unit! LOL but awesome anyway

[insanepoly]

Thanks for the critique everyone. I am so sorry I haven't really found the time to reply to everyone as it was a really busy and hectic week. Anyway, I will try to improve upon it and make some of the changes suggested.

Here's a render with Femme 1-

http://www.insanepoly.com/temp/femme007.jpg

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