check out this plane I modelled

[(B-HOLM)]

looks really cool, no crits from me really :(

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:applause:

[chepe297]

the plane itself looks good...
the wave itself looks good... disregarding the resolution...

but somehow they look a bit dodge when put together...
... probably because of the angle of the plane and the lighting...

well... that's what I think... :shrug:

[derwolpertinger]

i think you really gotta work on the lighting of the plane to make both the plane and the wave fit together better. maybe put a blueish light under the plane to simulate the light reflected by the ocean. additionally don't make that upper right corner that black, that looks pretty strange. as for the top of the plane use a directional slightly yellow light to simulate the sun and a few blueish fill lights representing the sky. i think that would make it better. :D

[Joril]

I agree with Chepe.
The plane and the waves(who seem to be to big compared to the plane) don't quite mix. I'd get another background.

[PureFire]

it sorta looks weird how the plane is motion blurred but the propellor isnt....and i agree with the background not fitting with the lighting of the plane.:thumbsup:

[Trion-5]

ok...my crit
If i'm not mistaken....the plane is the focal object of the piece correct?

If so....should you have a clear image of the plane with a perspective blur on the waves...that will also help with the size comparison...

Oh yeah....do the fore mentioned lighting techniques....

Other than that......good work....:wip:

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