Carrera, Dabinovic Bozidar (3D)

[blaXX++]

woah, this looks great!

would love to see some alternate shots / wireframe is possible!

*EDIT*

just saw the other thread, love the wires and the rims

[alexfalchi]

Hey vegass nice pic mate...nice car and background!!:thumbsup:


Alex.

[picolo]

mmm a porsche
:love:

[F10]

looks good vegass!

The car shadow tho would look great if it were biased on an angle to show direction of sunlight. It could give a better sense of realism and add some depth.
Great render tho!
:thumbsup:

[vegass]

Hey guys, thanks for those comments...
Ciao Alex, come stai amico? heheh, thanks for droppin' a comment!
Dave, you're right man, I should definietly fix that shadow.

[ajay1589]

beautiful render, nice angle and wonderful scenery....i especially like the fog(although the surrounding area should look a little foggier)

5 stars!

[Abyssis]

ok, and where is the driver? :eek:

[kmest]

this is realy nice man....
is that environment real or 3d??hahhaaa

and i just dont like the PIXELATE area's on back of the car...i know they're for the raytracing,,but they're the only problems i see now

great work

[vegass]

Well thanks again for those comments...
Abyssis : There's no driver...I forgot to model it, anyway, it's not big deal... ;)

[nachogrande]

Very nice compositing work. I can't say anything about your Carrera :) It is the king of all sports cars (For me of course)

[ReSeT]

Hi!

Well for the first moment the image looks nice, but:

I think the car looks like you've just set it into the scene as it is, the angle doesn't work for me. The scene lacks real movement and synergy, since as already mentioned, the driver's missing.

I would like to see the car in different angles. in a more spectacular way, now it's a little bit boring and just another 911 among hundreds of others, imho.

Try to render that scene in a higher resolution and scale it down to get rid of those aliasing artefacts on most horizontal lines.

[sanft]

Hi,

This is a nice picture. Unfortunately the great reflections which I have seen in your wip thread got lost in this perspective. Maybe you could find another background (with this kind of feeling) to do another render where the nice materials show more.

But as I said, this is a beautiful picture, especially the mood....

Greetings
Andrea

[emptyvoxel]

Technically, this is a nice piece. The composition is believable and the modeling and texturing are great. Artistically, it's lacking a strong focus. The car itself gives no sense of movement, and the fact that it is driverless adds to the perception that the car is parked on the road, rather than driving on it. The raytrace jaggies could probably be eliminated by upping your raytracing antialiasing, but I'm not familiar with the specifics of Maya.
As strange as it sounds, a less interesting scene would probably be appropriate to show off the car. Right now the car is competing with the scenery, and because the car is not positioned at an interesting angle, I think most people would be confused about what the focus of the image is.

Has anyone ever told you, you look just like Tupac Shakur? :p

~T

[vegass]

Hey Tencendur thanks for that useful comment
Has anyone ever told you, you look just like Tupac Shakur? :p
~T
Really, do I ? ;) hehehehe

[ktxed]

nice one Vegass :thumbsup:
Westside :D

[vegass]

Yo wazzzup man, thanks for droppin a comment! Westside4life ;)

[doca]

What? This is total sh..t! I never saw ugliest work before! He,he,he, I'm kidding Bozo, you know, zezam se. Great work. I like composition, model, the way you aranged car in background... I'll praise you around. He,he. See you around. Zdravo.

[vegass]

Hvala brate ! Sad kad vidim sta sam postovo ja sve na ovom forumu....eeee, jednostavno me sramota, stvarno je ovaj composition totalno sranje, slika nema nikakve dubine....ali sa modelom sam prilicno zadovoljan! Odakle si bre nasao ovaj prastari topik co'ece ? :D

btw : ...He,he,he, I'm kidding Bozo...
Zovi me kako hoces bre (konju, majmune) samo nemoj BOZO, obicno me prijatelji zovu Bole ili Daba (po prezimenu) :)

Vidimo se! :wavey:

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