Renovated Lobby, Olivier Campagne (3D)

[arquiteck09]

absolutly amazing , very nice lighting , are those people rpc´s ?? or you mede it yourself ??

[merc13]

hey,


very nice-the only ting that seems out of place are the bright patches(?) on the back wall-were they added in post?maybe if they weren't as bright-a small thing,but grraat work-later

[Neejoh]

I like the way you've integraded those people :) Model itself looks awesome.

[oliviercampagne]

http://www.oliviercampagne.com/gfx/lobby-avc2005.jpg
oops.. that's actually the image i submited for the competition ... no i feel stupid...
Thanks to all for comments !
The white patches are indeed cutout shapes in a wood panel.
And all peoples are photos composited in photoshop.

cheers
Olivier

[F10]

looks good!
The only thing that caught my eye was the stair railing and how it looked odd not going to the bottom steps and looks unporportionate.
The bottom step(stair landing) looks a little too high also, this being compared to the people but at different depths makes it look decieving, and also the height from other risers of the stairs (they dont match).

[Adriano-Zanetti]

Nice lighting, looks very real. But I'm not a big fan of all those different patterns/maps you use in your textures, a bit messy... maybe it's juts my own taste of interior design I should question here... I dunno.

good job anyway.

pe@ce

[aphexx]

absolutely perfect render i dont see a big mistake. the design is kinda retro. perfect integration of the people (what is not usual) and nice blooms.
just few things bout proportions as mentioned
you got 4 stars from me.

[otacon]

Looks like i could walk into the render. I like the colors and feel of it. The only thing that looks strange is the holes in the ceiling, they need more of a corner...right now they look like fabric thats being pushed up or something. It might have to do with the smoothing angle.

[FrizzleFry0]

Excellent work Olivier! The lighting and rendering is amazing. After staring at this pic for 10 minutes I could only find a few minor critiques. The pieces of carpet on the edges look too solid. I think the border on the threads of them are maybe too harsh. Perhaps blurring them a tiny bit would help. The man in the far back is somewhat transparant. Originally I thought it was due to motion blur, but his whole body seems to be the same amount of transparancy rather than just his arms or legs in motion.

[LAURO_MX]

Great job man! im realy liked this render:thumbsup:
cya

[Inxa]

Hi,


Amazing render.:thumbsup:

Great work. Reall love the feel to it. very very real.

Those holes are sopts isnt it.

can you explain the light setup.

thanks

[bmcaff]

Again, just like your previous AVC interior, this is really beautiful. The subtlety in lighting and the visual complexity is excellent because it doesn't over power the image. The people are well integrated and the cat is a nice touch. Best of luck in the comp.

[oliviercampagne]

thanks for all critics and comments !
kind of amazing how much things you can spot !! i like it !

for the holes in the ceilings, they are actually made to look like they were pushed in it... i wanted a smooth look in it.

FrizzleFry0, you are right, this guy is 90% transparent, should have been more subtle.. ok, usually, i do it to blend it more in the image... this time, it's not working great also because the other peoples are also complety opaque...

F10, good point on that, even if i like the combinaison i did for the rails... sure there is a slight problem of proportion regarding the landing step ...

cheers
Olivier

[johan21]

hey man - if you can spare the time to explain, could you tell us what your light setup for this was? or just post a wireframe of the whole 3dsmax scene

thanks !

[oliviercampagne]

hey !
here is the wireframe ...
about the light setup, one direct, the environment and few spotlights in the ceiling.

cheers
Olivier

http://www.oliviercampagne.com/gfx/wireframe-lobby.png

[gary-smith]

Great work! I couldn't tell which part of the scene was real and CG lol. Nice work on the texturing and lighting. The modeling is nice also :D

[KaDDD]

et ben dit dont ! !! et tu n'as que 2 etoiles , ca en vaut largos 4/5, tres bonne light , tres bon materiaux, bonne ambiance et incrust de perso conforme à la lumiere, mm le chat
je vais tanter de faire remonter cette note , anormalement basse aux vue de la qualité de ta prod
....c'est du bon taff

[nachogrande]

Oh this is a masterpiece. The texture of the ground is awesome.

[ad2mail]

Great work :thumbsup:

[geoffrey]

Love this image, and in fact most of your entries for the AVC contest.
(Your video was a bit surreal though!)

This decor in this image is very original and stylish. The people look like they are actually there. The floor and ceiling details are excellent. Don't you just love vray for lighting.

I like your image in expose 3 btw.
Looks good next to mine ;)

And good luck with the rest of competition

Geoff

[oliviercampagne]

thanks geoffrey !

curious to see yours printed ! waiting for my copy...
btw what do you mean by " Your video was a bit surreal though! "

cheers
Olivier

[geoffrey]

I thought that the lobby renovating itself is cool, don't get me wrong.
It's just the way it renovated i.e. flashing between non renovated and renovated
Not reality....surreal! thats all
I liked the stills of the woman crossing the road to. very stylish
You got your people intergrated into the scence extremely well. Especially the lighting
Do you get models to pose?

Your expose image turned out really well.
I got my book last Friday. Hope they haven't forgotten you!

Geoff

[oliviercampagne]

hey,
yes i know what you mean, hehe well all this was kind of improvisation... i could have spend more time on the transitions...

and for the model... hehe she is my muse

cheers
Olivier

[geoffrey]

I've just noticed that you've used the same lamp shades in both scenes.
I've also been wondering what that orange stair looking thing is on your expose image.
An art exhibit?
I thought it was a stair when I got the proofs!

[oliviercampagne]

The orange thing is my own design ... like assembly of stairs , yes with a blow up of a portrait in serigraphy on it, and the lamp shade is a design for a dutch designer.

The space is actually existing in Amsterdam. It was a church.
And ones i mesure all the dimensions of it and made it in 3d and bring some staff in it.

and actually, this is a personal work, they mix up credits ...

[geoffrey]

Yeah they messed around with both my images
The one next to yours they have cropped, although I don't mind.
My other image, about 10 pages on, the contrast is completely wrong

I posted the correct image here

DNA v2.0 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=252796)

Geoff

[t7200]

Looks good. What inspired you to do this?

[KIDI]

hey

amazing lightning, very realistic :thumbsup: .

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[priad]

great render!! could you tell us your render settings (first, second bounce and exposure control)?

superbe travail :thumbsup: !

[tanweechin]

i really liek the feel of it...how should i say this..ermm..it feels very relaxing and calm..
the colour of the whole things is rather very 'nice'

anyway..i feels that the composition has sum problem. the 2 people at far back and teh one sitting does not match as in the size.

and after reading sum comments.
the stairs is abit starnge if you take a second look on it.
anyway..great job..
like it./...

[AmpedDigital]

Another photo real picture ! :P

[ITInc.-Alex]

Really some impresive work....but i think that thw lighting needed so work for perfect realism...the personS are GRRREEAAAATTTTTT!!..keep up the good work...wait for more....!

[DGCG]

UN UN UN UN BELIVEBLE!!

10 Stars !!!
lol :P

[Weider]

The thing I like more in your scene is the material, the style is awesome, the realist is great too.
Très beau travail!

[oliviercampagne]

Thanks to all for your nice comments !

[wcraig]

This image is inspiring and amazing and all that. I just have one question, right below the orange wall, I dont understand the reflection it is making on the floor. It seems to short and to reflected. I might not understand whats physicly goin on.

[Apharius]

I Love the retro look ,, the cat adds a nice touch ,, lighting, textures, and composition are excellent !!http://www.oliviercampagne.com/gfx/lobby-avc2005.jpg
oops.. that's actually the image i submited for the competition ... no i feel stupid...
Thanks to all for comments !
The white patches are indeed cutout shapes in a wood panel.
And all peoples are photos composited in photoshop.

cheers
Olivier[/QUOTE]

[musicjerm]

Very swell work, your materials seem to be top notch. Keep it up.

[musicjerm]

did you come up with that floor texture on your own? I mean the whole pattern and everything. It's really cool.

[sos518]

so so so beautiful

[MayaZbrushMax]

hah~

Excellent!A high-tech style,but the environment is so soft that makes it look unreal.I think if the light switches sharper,it maybe work.

[Senkaru]

*mouth drops open* thats insane! it looks great!... wow!

[shiko21]

great great work i wish i can do it of any of my scene

please mester can isend u file i made and u make my scene like and manage my system light
if there is no problem please tell me

[archangelsky]

OSOMNESS. 5stars.
one thing. Why can u see ligth spots coming from the back wall trough the man walking away?
besides that. all i can say itlooks REAL

[chuckiewads]

man thats really good.the lighting is great and the detail is unbeliveable

[vccad2009]

This is great work

[tsmith]

Stunning really. Deffinately one of the finest I have seen. I believe you did justice
to the designers vision.

Good work!

[jo-joker]

cool:applause: I like you work!!!

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