La Clicherana

[Nazirull]

Nice.....your outline stroke definitely needs no practice tho....:thumbsup:

Cant wait for the paint!:bounce:

[TryForce]

the line art is pretty busy at some places.. but if your going to color it its ok.

[Squibbit]

outline stroke.. busy.. oh u mean the line thickness ?

yea i just draw the lines and that's it, never thought about
how thick it should be in places , and I didn't draw all shadows,
cause it wasn't meant to be a b/w pic, is this what you mean ?



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[TryForce]

nah, not really.
for example... if your going to do the shield on the right arm.. there r some places wich are pleasured to get some shading... how are you going to add shading there?

also may you just resize it abit up... i mean to see everything with abit more place. did you resized it here or is it the original.?

(btw. the bussy places r those places where is many detail to do)

[vivien82]

nice character design!

[Squibbit]

yea i'm trying to create a balance with the detailed and non-detailed
parts in the pic and i'm not quite there yet


think i'm gonna have an update for the linework in a couple of days
and if i get no more comments on this i'm gonna move on to coloring


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[Nazirull]

One thing...I think the little cute sheild should be at the other hand? So u she can swing her cute sword on one hand and after that defend with the other? :curious:

[Squibbit]

One thing...I think the little cute sheild should be at the other hand? So she can swing her cute sword on one hand and after that defend with the other? :curious:

yea i thought about that, but decided she's developed this fighting style where
the shield is better on the right arm ... hmm ...how about a shield in both arms ?



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[jmBoekestein]

She's turned straight towards us.I think it's more fun when they're turned a bit awqy from camera, makes more chances for cool scenery and 'dramatic interventions'.

[Squibbit]

dude, I ain't gonna turn her , too much work :D


besides, I was thinking of just painting her, without any
'dramatic interventions'

will think about that scenery tho


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[ajay1589]

for the most part, when you see heroines with those tops on, it smooshes their breasts up a little
the one you have on her droops a little and makes her breasts seem large, but also flat

[Squibbit]

yea ok thanks , gotta look into that


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[TheFirstAngel]

very cute cutie! pose sugestion: i'd straighten her axis a bit from chest (set bra straight) upwards. that should solve the ballance problem. sitting in her hips, you can pose her nose almost over the standfoot. (test, imagine you wait for the bus... drop your chewinggum. watch where it landed ;))

great ornamental works. love your details. any plans for an environment yet?
hehe, looking forard to you progress, keep on rocking Panu! Go Squib, Go!

[Squibbit]

umh...dunno about updates anytime soon... Avatar World Wars
at Daily Sketch forum (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=245220) going on ... :D


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