Troopers

[LittleFenris]

This is a very rough sketch, but looking at it I get the feeling the sky is too bare. The sky really needs some more action in it if you are going to make it such a prominent part of the piece. Maybe some sort of landing vehicle for those troopers, or air support or something along those lines. Looks great other than that though.

[nineinchneil]

the figures are flushed out pretty well; the poses are great, the shading is great, good stuff. but yeah, the environment needs more. put some more detail into the building they're facing. you need to draw the viewer's eye to what they're focusing on, since it looks to be in the frame. right now, the focus stops on the soldiers themselves. it's looking good man. keep going.

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