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Aljoker
10-14-2002, 05:43 AM
i finished this burned rusty air craft. this week, what do you think about it.

any feedback or comments are welcome.

http://www.arab3.com/upload/images/Oct02/salem3d_thelostplane.jpg

Libor
10-14-2002, 08:37 AM
Ehm, quite simplistic :shrug:
You are probably newbie in cg so not so bad start.

I think it needs detailing which is more question of time and hard work than skill! Another important thing is lighting - your img totally lacks shadows - they are really important for illusion of 3d space - try to place one directional light for sun with shadows "on" and few fill light (omni or point - depends on 3d app) without shadows. Your fills are really oversaturated now...scattering light is very subtle effect.

You could also change camera to a more intersting view - now its pretty boring (central compostition works rarely).

Just my 2 cents:D

say-g
10-14-2002, 09:31 AM
You are probably newbie in cg

could you be any blunter ?


imo the bump and spec are too high... and there is bump on the fuselage and not on the wings or tail :surprised

marcoos
10-14-2002, 11:23 AM
if u are newbiein CG, it is quite nice :)

Aljoker
10-15-2002, 03:15 PM
thanks guys ...

about the texture and the bump i'll try to fix it.

about the shadow i used one omni and apply the shadow.where is the shadow ,.,. ??? I DONT KNOW :surprised

I used Vreay to render this image ..

i will try to add more detail and fix the texture ..

by the way ... i used Adobe photo shope to made the texture ..


thanks again for comments ..

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