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Haldir 02-15-2002, 10:32 AM Ok...so I accept the challenge. A bit of a late start, but, schools been keepin' me busy(I just saw this challeng a few days ago. )
Enough Excuses...Here are a few links to the lil' critter I'm workin' on. He's still very much a work in progress and needs much refinement. So, feel free to tear em apart. Any suggestions would be most welcome...
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/front.jpg
(I know! his arms are way to small, already fixed it.)
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/perspective.jpg
(Do the antennae need to be shortened ya think?)
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/perspective2.jpg
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/profile.jpg
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/revised.jpg
This is the current state of my character. Again, he's still far from finished, but he's gettin' there. Next step is to start blockin' in all the gizmos and Toys.
Well' there it is...Lemme know what you think guys.
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ACFred
02-15-2002, 10:50 AM
Neat character.....and NO, don't shorten those antennae! You have super short arms and they'll be nicely countered by those antennae. Heck, you could even have his antennae act as a substitute in situations where his arms aren't appropriate.
Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see him finished and moving around.
Good luck!
Alec
:rolleyes: very funny ;)
good luck too
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Haldir
02-16-2002, 03:20 PM
Ok...here's my latest update.
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/1.gif
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/2.gif
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/3.gif
I gave 'em a kinda O2 tank backpack thinga jigger...but what I cant figure out is what Kinda weapon this lil' bugger needs.
And do you think his head is too big? I want it to be a bit larger than usual but still look like something that is physically plausible.
Any input would be most appreciated...
Thanks guys, and good luck to you all.
Totitch
02-17-2002, 02:24 AM
Hi Q-Bert! ;)
(your avatar make me think to this game...)
What a mutation! very funny
Is it what we will look like after apocalypse?
It's nice!
You started well!
All is nice except one thing:
I don't like his feet!
too small!!! :D :D :D
Haldir
02-17-2002, 02:50 AM
Yeah...
You're definately right about the feet, Totitch;)
I'm gonna work on the rest of his body today and prolly post tonight. I just can't make up my mind whether or not I wanna make him a biped(2 legs) or give em some kinda crazy wheeled contraption that he wheels about on.
whattaya think?
Wheels or no wheels? I would prolly give em 3 in a tripod setup if I gave em to him.
P.S. Q-berts a cute lil' bugger ain't he?
I'm liking this model. It's very unique. Is he an alien? The only crit/advice I would give for now is maybe define his arms a bit more. They look a bit non functional, at the moment. But really, it could be left alone. Great work :)
Haldir
02-17-2002, 10:09 AM
I'm workin' on the arms right now...
Here a couple of screen grabs:
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/Quadramembered2.gif
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/Quadramembered.gif
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/Quadramembered1.gif
Aside from starting to define his arms I went ahead and gave em a couple more...Whaddaya think?
Still trying to figure out what I wanna do w/ his lower body...
I was plannin' on spidery robotic legs but somebody already beat me to it...I'll figure it out.
Haldir
02-17-2002, 01:00 PM
Well here's my latest update...I'm tired. G'night...
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/jordan_ant.gif
Lemme know what'cha think.
the uptade must be made in your topic on reply ....
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=2435
Wintermute
02-17-2002, 01:53 PM
LOL
I love it!! the tiny arms and the huge antenae...keep it up...don't know if I'll finish my vehicle, let a lone get to the landscape!!
Here's my wip if you're interested
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=1811
Haldir
02-17-2002, 02:12 PM
Here's my latest update...I'm blockin' in his stomach and legs. Then some more detail work and then on to texturing.
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/ant_legs.gif
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/jordan_ant.gif
Lemme know what'cha think.
Haldir
02-17-2002, 02:15 PM
Thanks Wintermute...
Here's one more pic:
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/ant_legs.gif
P.S. I loved your vehicle mod Wintermute, very cool!
When updating use your old thread, I merged them, also I embedded your pics, it's nicer to look at your progression without clicking links :)
-lildragon
Haldir
02-18-2002, 05:17 AM
Lil Dragon: Sorry, I'm a bit new here...that won't happen again.:o
Heres a 360 turntable of my lil bugscouter character. The file size is a lil' big cause I was havin' trouble w/ my divx codecs...sorry.
Lemme know what you guys think.
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/Comp%205.gif
This is a kickin' forum!
Haldir
02-19-2002, 03:25 AM
Well, this is just an environment test so I can get a feel of the end product...
Needs work I know...so lemme know what you guys think.
http://the3d.ws/artists/g_christian/PA_ENVIRONMENT.gif
pabbloz
02-21-2002, 04:54 PM
Hi Haldir!
I like very much the big anthenas!!! cool idea!
The tube has very good modelling too.
I think all model is very clean.
I suggest you change the colors. Black and yellow could be fine! He remmember a bee. :)
I saw the envirnoment! I love it! very good! I like very much the queue of the characters, good idea.
Keep working as now and follow the way you did in the environment. I think is the best one.
P.S: I hadn't seen the gif!! very good! I had thougth something combination of colours as you put him. But maybe I would change the blue for other more dramatic... black... gray... I'm not sure. Did you try to use a dirty plugin or something similar.
Totitch
02-21-2002, 05:07 PM
The last picture is great!
It makes me imagine stories with this characters...
Good stuff!
A agree with Pabbloz for the colors
And just one critic: Work a bit more on his legs
Its very low-poly and i think they are too long for him...
Try an other way of legs,just to see
Very nice!
pabbloz
02-21-2002, 05:12 PM
yes... Totitch is right. I had already thought about the low poly and the length of the legs and I think the same as he.
Maybe some more short and different... could be like the wheels of a tank, you know?. :p
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