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Jviau
05-24-2005, 02:39 AM
Please help me get better by giving me some straight criticism
on any or all of these animations

http://www.justinv.com/

Thanks ahead of time for your time!
JV

stewartjones
05-25-2005, 04:05 PM
You have some interesting ideas going on there. But, you are missing some of the major foundations of animation. Spacing is really off in a lot of your shots, and I would work on more of the principles to get them looking better.

Jviau
05-25-2005, 10:12 PM
Thanks Vyntax your advice is similar to others recent advice about
revisiting the foundations. So i shall.
Thanks again!

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