WIP ;alien concept

[TRXSI]

nice work and good modeling...but i think u can make hands better than.

[oliveira]

TRXSI,
yes, i am working on the hands right now,
thanks!!

[matty2x4]

Looks great!
I think the bits under the arms.... (Awwww crap, I dont know what they are called, wing muscles) need a more muscular shape/appearance. He his so trim and taught and they are looking a bit flabby-ish. I sugest looking up a pic of Burce Lee he had great ummm what ever those muscles are called. And I think that workout treatment could go on along to the under side of the arms, they look a little saggy.
Oh and his thumb looks to small to go with his fingers... maybe thats a perspective thing.
Hope thats not to harsh
looks good, nice neck.
Matty2x4

[sarNz]

now im going to have freakin nightmares :(

scary alien! everything i wouldnt want one to look like in real life! Great job on the modelling though. what do you have in mind for the color scheme?

[X3N3TIX]

Dude! that thing looks awesome and it totally reminds me of the Revenants from the Doom series of games nice job keep it up!

[de_tomato]

Looks great!
I think the bits under the arms.... (Awwww crap, I dont know what they are called, wing muscles) need a more muscular shape/appearance. He his so trim and taught and they are looking a bit flabby-ish. I sugest looking up a pic of Burce Lee he had great ummm what ever those muscles are called. And I think that workout treatment could go on along to the under side of the arms, they look a little saggy.
Oh and his thumb looks to small to go with his fingers... maybe thats a perspective thing.
Hope thats not to harsh
looks good, nice neck.
Matty2x4

I kinda agree with you at first, but then, this is no human. I think it will kinda goes well with what it is rite now. Its look weird only coz it resemble a human being but yet it wasnt a human.

Good job there. I agree with the had need more work out.

[goodmesh]

great work so far, but the palms seems to be reversed and weird. some unnecessary loops...?

looking forward for updates

[Scotcho]

Very nice model so far. Few small changes that I think would improve what you have. The tendan seems too sharp on the front shoulder to the bicep.. aswell as the sharp fold under the pecks. And the transition between the bicep and forearm could be more toned to fit his torso, perhaps hollowed in more to revealed some of the tendans. Great potential though, you have some nice features in there.

[oliveira]

Hi all!!
thanks for all comments!!
matty2x4-- hey ,great idea! i will try gets some Bruce Lees DVD!
sarNz--thanks man!
Scotcho-- yes, i think that you're right! i will work on it and let you see the updates soon,
de_tomato--thank you! i will try do use the human anatomy in some points of the alien,
but like you told i need know that it's a alien!!

i''m posting some updates and some images that i forgot when i posted first time.

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http://www.alexoliver.art.br/gallery/img/6/11.jpg
http://www.alexoliver.art.br/gallery/img/6/12.jpg
http://www.alexoliver.art.br/gallery/img/6/7.jpg
http://www.alexoliver.art.br/gallery/img/6/15.jpg

[NicoDN]

Really a great beginning, I will look at the progression !

[dmonk]

Dude!


You agian with the crazy excellent modeling!

I wish I had a good crit for you, but I don't. I actually really like this. One thing though the index finger looks a bit off, but thats no biggie.


I can't imagine how nuts your work is going to look when you start texturing.:D

Sorry for the fanboyishness, but for someone relatively new to 3d, your making some highly impressive stuff.

Keep it up dude!

[DieByTheSword]

Oliveira,

Im impressed... very very good work... a creature like that need some little teeth though..


Keep up!

[pogonip]

Very impressive work I love the way it looks fleshy and while not human the anatomy looks functional ...man you and KWAK make some impressive models with XSI and the SUBd turns out great results . I am using 3D max right now but I am deffinatly going to think about switching to XSI ...

[jmBoekestein]

inspiring dude!!! :thumbsup:

Now I'm convinced I'll have to get into subD modelling!
I really like how you make them ugly and fleshy like that, the only thing that strikes me now is that his arms seem to be flabby, if that was the intent I would point out that it won't animate well. But I'm sure it wasn't, but still, it looks a bit 'linear' if you take my meaning. :D

:thumbsup:

[JamesMarshall]

It's michael jackson!

[Vahle]

Great modelling, very impressive character :thumbsup:

[oliveira]

pogonip-yes, XSI is very good, i just begin my studys in CGI 4 months ago and i choiced XSI.

jmBoekestein--THANKS

JamesMarshall--THANKS JAMES

[frameless]

man i just have to say something now:
First of all this is awesome!
Second you are a very fast learner!
Third...ROCK ON! :thumbsup:

PS: The head reminds me of "Thor" from SG-1 ;)

[Astrofly]

This is an amazing model. WOW!! Looks plausible to me and really scary. I am visualizing him with grayish skin with brown mottles. I can see what some people are saying about the palms. They look convex where humans are concave, but this is an alien after all that ostensibly evolved separately from Earth life. I have a scene in my head now where some farmer wakes up at night to strange lights and noises outside and opens the front door to that thing. yeah cliche but scary!!! I am looking forward to see this thing textured.

[Zookoo]

looks great! i like it's flabbiness around the edge, makes it look like a fish in a way, or like that water man character from Hellboy! how long did it take to model the alien btw?

[el28]

Hey, I like it! The skin stretching on the body. Just those hands don´t look from same caracter. Do the same thing with it, make those fingers and palm thinner and the skin doing like the rest. And don´t forget the membranes between fingers. :thumbsup:

Waiting for ups. :buttrock:

[collings]

excellent ! great modeling :thumbsup:
hand's palm need some work

-nico-

[learner88]

absolutely perfect!great modeling,that effect of the skin sticked on the body is great!

[oxyg3n]

Nice work on the muscles and details on the upper body. I am looking forward to more updates!

[HapZungLam]

It's michael jackson!

I think the model looks better.

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