cartoon character animation

[pollywoggles]

I really like where you're going with this piece! I like the look, the characters, and how you have the arms contrasting each other. This is going to be very good when you're done with it.

I figure you're still cleaning up some of the spiney feel and will add more overlapping action (I noticed particularly with the hands, when the arms come down from large arcs, I'd like to see the elbows/hand/fingers with a little more drag -- also I'd like some more overlap with the hips (and torso) particulary when she does some of her more violent actions). Some of the poses aren't quite reading for me... for instance, when she's pulling her arm back to angle them behind her, I sometimes loose her forearm (it looks like her arm just ends at the elbow).

I also noticed popping a few times... but it could be just my video connection.

Really, this is great work. I'm looking forward to seeing updates!

[undua]

thanks for your post Paul.

At this moment I try to solve some problems with the arms of my character and cleaning the animation.

Thanks for your help.

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