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eyetooth
05-19-2005, 10:51 AM
Here are some images I am working on at the moment. I will keep updating this thread with new work rather than starting a new thread evertime i do something.

any crits or comments are welcome, please be harsh as I would really like to improve my work.

thanks

These are all sketches that I would like to colour in photoshop.

Vulnerability and judgment
http://www.eyetooth.nildram.co.uk/vulner.jpg

fishy
http://www.eyetooth.nildram.co.uk/fishy.jpg

annatomically
http://www.eyetooth.nildram.co.uk/annatomically.jpg
eyetooth
05-20-2005, 09:22 AM
I added a little colour to vulnerability and judgment last night, let me know what you think.

http://www.eyetooth.nildram.co.uk/vulner%28C%29.jpg
eyetooth
06-10-2005, 09:02 AM
I have done a little more work on this, and would really apreciate any advice you may have. I am trying for a slightly stylised look with this one, although I would like the anatomy to be precise.

http://www.eyetooth.nildram.co.uk/vulner3.jpg (http://www.eyetooth.nildram.co.uk/vulnerability-&-judgment-3.jpg)
ajay1589
06-10-2005, 10:55 PM
no replies....so depressing

anyways i would consider redoing the arms(they are too skinny at the moment...they should be a little muscular considering the torso looks semi-muscular) the colors and lighting look fine right now though

cery creative drawings...im looking forward to the fish
Mario The ][
06-10-2005, 11:40 PM
:) Hello there,

As you can see i'm fairly new around here... but still i wanted to say some things i noticed about that image; like ajay1589 said, the arms are to thin, the head could maybe a bit bigger and i am not quite certain about that.

I think the colors take away to much at the moment, somehow they seem to oversaturated and blurred to me. I would like more contrast in dark/ligth there, but thats only preference.

From the actual drawing i thought you would like to go for a more disturbing/colder look.
Now it seems, well more peaceful to me even with the bloodlike lower part.

Anyway, only my opinions, i like it and will see where you go with it, keep up the great work!
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