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cOrbeau
05-16-2005, 09:50 PM
yann Tisseron has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=7723)

Latest Update: Final Image: The chinese master
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116325350_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116325350_large.jpg)

This is the final image. Finally I'm very happy to participate for the first time !!!

-cOrbeau-

cOrbeau
05-16-2005, 10:10 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116277825_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116277825_large.jpg)

This is my contribution for the Master and servant chalenge. I would like to do a beast and a chinese old man.The relationship between the two characters is magic. The man is dominating the beast but it's quite odd because the beast is stronger than the old man in real. I would like to focus myself on the light which is very important regarding the drama and the magical aspect of the scene. The contrast and the light/dark as well is very important and strengthen the realtionship between the two characters.

-cOrbeau-

cOrbeau
05-16-2005, 10:18 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116278326_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116278326_large.jpg)

This is the line art. Very simple.

cOrbeau
05-16-2005, 10:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116278756_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116278756_large.jpg)

The first colors are here , I'm ok to continue.

cOrbeau
05-16-2005, 10:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116279005_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116279005_large.jpg)

I begin to find some ideas for the ambiance...

cOrbeau
05-16-2005, 10:36 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116279371_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116279371_large.jpg)

Here , I begin to start a background , to equilibrate the image an put a red/green contrast to make sens.

twisteums
05-16-2005, 10:37 PM
incredible light,...and what an amazing world in your mind. Keep on this way, my friend

cOrbeau
05-16-2005, 10:41 PM
Thank you twisteums , I try to post all the WIP because I maked this image in four days and I did'nt knew how to post for enter the chalenge. Sorry for my poor english.

mv
05-16-2005, 10:46 PM
very good illustration, the lighting & mood are indeed fabulous :)

don't forget to upload the following milestones though :

Concept Sketch
Line Art
Coloring WIP
Final Coloring
Final Image - JPG (online) AND print resolution TIF (FTP)

cOrbeau
05-16-2005, 11:24 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116282238_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116282238_large.jpg)

I would like to make a beast and a chinese old man.The relationship between the two characters is magic. The man is dominating the beast but it's quite odd because the beast is stronger than the old man in real. I would like to focus myself on the light which is very important regarding the drama and the magical aspect of the scene. The contrast and the light/dark as well is very important and strengthen the realtionship between the two characters.

-cOrbeau-

yznah
05-16-2005, 11:26 PM
c sympa tout ca^^
en plus ca me dit qqchose tes trucs, j'ai du deja en voir sur cafésalé jcrois
allez hop on se dépeche c bientot finit le challenge machin la!!:p

(sorry for all the non french speaker fufufu)

rwitzsche
05-16-2005, 11:34 PM
This is a very interesting image. I like that it is dark and most of the light comes from the lamp. The old man seem vulnerable next to the beast, but he is clearly in charge.

arkinet
05-16-2005, 11:36 PM
dude, that was quick!! hehehe... good luck, this is gonna be a great piece!:thumbsup:

cOrbeau
05-17-2005, 10:12 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116321162_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116321162_large.jpg)

The format has been changed , finally I need more space around the characters. This is not definitive , but I can change finaly...

cOrbeau
05-17-2005, 10:18 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116321536_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116321536_large.jpg)

Too red ! too red. Use your brain and the complementary colors , human will be more at the first plan. I ues the green for the monster and red for the human , this is to reinforce the relationship/ contradiction between the two characters.

authentic
05-17-2005, 11:03 AM
didn't care about this one before. it's really nice. locve the colors.

cOrbeau
05-17-2005, 11:13 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116324837_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116324837_large.jpg)

Just a detail who takes me time just to find cold and hots colors in light , but just a little variation. It\'s look good I hope.

cOrbeau
05-17-2005, 11:19 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116325181_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116325181_large.jpg)

I think the image is finished , some details were changed , like the arm of the moster and other...the opposition of the colors ; cold/hot , green/red complementary colors , give all his sens to the image. Really what I wanted to do. Hope you like.

cOrbeau
05-17-2005, 11:22 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116325350_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7723/7723_1116325350_large.jpg)

This is the final image. Finally I'm very happy to participate for the first time !!!

-cOrbeau-

ChrisThatGuy
05-17-2005, 02:05 PM
Looks great. Good luck.

cOrbeau
05-17-2005, 02:21 PM
Thank you for all the comments ! I put a gif to see the progress;


WIP (http://www.plumedecorbeau.com/images/wipanim2.gif)

cOrbeau
05-17-2005, 03:32 PM
Someone could help me please , an admin for ewample ? I have uploaded the hi res image 2 times (300 dpi with ftp codes and name ...with leech ftp), but I have a message on the upload page tell me I have not yet uploaded the final image on the ftp ! Please help me ! thank you

Vectorius
05-17-2005, 03:41 PM
:) Salu corbeau!!:scream: A good picture i see here..:thumbsup: I've looking at your website too and i saw you're a good artist..maybe for your picture you should add some textures or effects in the background..it seems to me too empty ..For caracters i've nothing to say just contast them a little bit.

Good luck !

bowditch
05-18-2005, 12:58 AM
You know I like your idea. It is clear what is going on with the man and the monster. There is a sort of simbiosis. The man is blind and needs his campanion to guide him while he enlightens the beast with his ancient wisdom. Nice interpretation of the theme!

TheMagnetic
05-18-2005, 07:55 AM
dont mean to sound stupid but full name is so close to being the same as the musical director of Amelie! probably sound like a stupid american but any way. Im really loving your picture man. the mood is very nice. I love it when a thumb nail sells the picture for me. your lantern is pretty cool. I also did one but its not as good as yours. well congrats man. talk to you later.

cOrbeau
05-18-2005, 06:11 PM
Thank you !

dont mean to sound stupid but full name is so close to being the same as the musical director of Amelie! probably sound like a stupid american but any way.

Excuse my poor english but I don't understand. :shrug:

daadaa
05-18-2005, 06:15 PM
i think he means that if you picked a better name, it will also make people like your painting more :)

and awsome painting!! gud luck

arkinet
05-18-2005, 06:24 PM
simple but conveys the message, great job bro & good luck!!

xric7
05-18-2005, 08:05 PM
excellent image!!
great design and color.
love ur characters a lot.
congratulation and good luck in final judge.
cheers.:buttrock: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

anzibon
05-19-2005, 12:04 AM
hi Yann,

this is also my first time posting for a challenge here. great experience, huh?

i know you've posted your final, but one thing jumps out at me. the light on the man's face is coming from the lantern below, but the hat is lit from above. it feels like with the simplicity of the scene (which I love) you should keep the one light source.

hope this doesn't kill your buzz. i really dig the image. the old mage looks so confident and strong even though the monster is enormous. good stuff.


~B

anzibon
05-19-2005, 12:07 AM
Are you still having trouble with the upload?

make sure you go to the page with the instructions and either press F5 or update on your web browser.

is your ftp software showing a successful upload? the file you upload will not show up in the FTP directory. it gets immediately moved and renamed.

good luck,
~B

cOrbeau
05-19-2005, 10:44 AM
Thank you Anzibon , the upload is ok ! For the light on the guy , I know that it's not logical . This is I wanted , just an essential thing , the man's face is the center of the image , the more important for me is the light who tell something for me. god ! what a bad english ! :shrug: The left part of the image is no empty , just for show the past of the action and to question the spectator .


Bye

cOrbeau
05-19-2005, 10:09 PM
Please , someone know when is it possible to know the results?

cOrbeau
05-20-2005, 08:40 AM
i think he means that if you picked a better name, it will also make people like your painting more :)

and awsome painting!! gud luck

My name ? cOrbeau ? it means crow in english.

tuck
05-20-2005, 10:06 AM
Congratulations!! Looks beautiful and nice colors! Good Luck!:thumbsup:

Slav
05-20-2005, 12:29 PM
really cool concept... great job!

frixon
05-20-2005, 12:55 PM
you've got some skills there. excellent lighting and atmo. one of the best on the challenge (my opinion)

cOrbeau
05-21-2005, 04:24 PM
Hooo ! thank you very much ! :)

cOrbeau
05-22-2005, 08:17 AM
Please , someone know when is it possible to know the results?



Yes , could you tell me please ?

paperclip
05-22-2005, 10:03 AM
Haven't seen this one in a while! I'm glad to see you finished it. The colors ended up being beautiful- lovely glow from the red lantern.

However...one teeny weeny crit...I think you should have worked on the background a tiny bit more...there's nothing there..I understand that you want to put the attention on the master and servant, but it would be nice to have some idea of where they are, apart from the sky...
Apart from that, I just love your Chinese master, he's rather unique and I love the expression on his face, it goes with the atmosphere of the picture perfectly.

Congratulations on finishing!! :thumbsup: :applause:

Arc80
05-22-2005, 03:12 PM
Congratulations on the finish. Very cool piece and i like the colour pallete that you chose.

Goodluck and see you around.

cheers :applause:

cOrbeau
05-29-2005, 10:36 AM
paperclip> I did'nt want to make a background , just to see only the characters. Thank you :thumbsup:

ilusiondigital
05-30-2005, 11:32 AM
Hey fantastic image, i miss this one. Congratulations

cOrbeau
06-12-2005, 10:00 AM
Ho thanks illusiondigital !

element5
06-14-2005, 02:31 AM
Nice colouring and composition :)

cOrbeau
06-15-2005, 09:36 AM
really , you like the compo ? that's a good thing.

maxim capra
06-15-2005, 10:29 AM
My name ? cOrbeau ? it means crow in english.

i think he meant your name (yann tisseron) - which sounds like yann tierson, the guy behind the music of the film 'amelie'

besides that, i just have to say that i really love your image :) it's forever on my hardrive for future inspiration.
the only thing i don't like so much is the right hand of the beast (the hand above the man). is so strong in focus (at least for me) but does lack a lot of details and proper shading, so it does annoy me a little bit....

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