PA Challenge - Character - Dom

[Totitch]

Good start!
it's nice...

just one critic:
the eye brow zone...(don't know to say it in english...Arcade in french) is too much angular for a girl...
The rest looks Ok!
Can you send a side view to see her profil...
Her nose and mouth are sweet!.. :)


Waiting for the next step...

Sorry for my ridiculous English!

[dominicqwek]

:D

Thanks for the reply!
The brows i have not adjusted yet and yes you are right about them. Will do the ammendments.

Will be posting an update soon and include the side profile. Thanks for the comments.:)

And by the way, your english is good.

[Tennis]

looks good, can we have a look at the rest of the body and stuff ? if it's done :)
keep it up.

[dominicqwek]

Thanks for the comments!! Here are my updates.. the arms/shoulder are not ready yet so excuse them. As for her top, the rough shape is there, but there'll definitely be add-ons in future as well as modifications.

Currently working on other projects. sulk...

:confused: so i can't say whether i can complete her on time. but nonetheless i'll update as often as possible!! so do keep a look out. your comments are crucial you know!!!

Thanks again.

:D

[dominicqwek]

Side view as requested...ignore the back of the head first. Might or might know use the details there.;)

This one's for Totitch!

[Koma]

cool design ,i wanna see the rest of the body .
some critic : you can make a strap for the lens or make the lens a bit larger and bot it to the head ,the body is not weld but probably normal because he is not finish and the attachement with the head and the neck is unaturel look your back into a mirror ...just under the hole .And dont forget to put a kind of gas mask .
great start !!!

[dzogchen]

Nice model. From the side view, the side of the nose seem a little odd. If you would reduce the size of the nose and thicken the lips( especially the upper lip) she would look sexier. Unless this the way you want her to look, I shall not interfere with you freedom of creativity.:D Keep going.

[cerreto]

HI dom nice looking character very tight and clean id like my models to looks this well put together looking forward to updates

[dave_baer]

...id like my models to looks this well put together...
You're joking... right? :D

Very nice DOM...

[dominicqwek]

Thanks for the comments. I'll work on them.

[dominicqwek]

Here's the final work..ouch. Sore fingers...

[dominicqwek]

Yes yes, i know about the jaggy render

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