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Deathknight
05-16-2005, 12:14 AM
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Title: Moes Tavern
Name: Ian Crane
Country: Australia
Software: 3ds max, Photo-Paint

This is a piece I did just to show what u can do with the basics. Its more of a dream sequence but I think I got it all down.
The frem is kinda just to pull it all together
Ducimus
05-16-2005, 02:50 AM
Could use alot more work, your left side windows' textures are all screwy...

In general though i think it is lackin detail and proper lighting...

Please, go back and finish, I see it's potential but It is missing that finished touch...
Deathknight
05-16-2005, 06:34 AM
Oh is that so! well ok just for you. personally I kinda like it
redogre
05-16-2005, 01:01 PM
and please remove that car...
Greedo
05-16-2005, 02:42 PM
Oh is that so! well ok just for you. personally I kinda like it

Relax man u have to expect criticism if u post you wan to post your work here!!!
Did u model homer or is that a picture?
coltraIN
05-16-2005, 03:27 PM
Take out the ridiculous lensflare.
itsallgoode9
05-16-2005, 06:34 PM
Hmmmmmm....im not really sure why the the hydrant is see through and why you can see the backgrond through the windows. alot of your stuff looks orribly low res such as the car and the texture on the street..... In real life Moe's would have an apostrophe in it; not sure if it does on the simposons or not. I think you should keep working on it really.
FrizzleFry0
05-19-2005, 02:05 PM
Like the rest of your "finished" work, it needs a lot of tweaking. Nearly all of the textures are too clean and blatantly repeating. The shadows aren't very accurate either, and the car's composite is looks very rough. Also, I'm not sure why you're able to see the wall and ground behind the bar through the windows. I know you seem to be completely confident and happy with your work, which is fine, but please actually read these critiques and don't shrug people's suggestions off as a joke. We're taking the time to write these for your benefit.
2012_C.E.S.A.R.
05-24-2005, 09:45 AM
HEY, YOU SUCK!!.......none of your works deserves to be in cgtalk.com, and you have no education PUNK


Why donīt you just leave this page, stop posting you horrible stuff here.
redogre
05-24-2005, 11:56 AM
This is too harsh...

He only needs time and lots of working, but everybody deserves to be here...
FrizzleFry0
05-24-2005, 08:19 PM
HEY, YOU SUCK!!.......none of your works deserves to be in cgtalk.com, and you have no education PUNK


Why donīt you just leave this page, stop posting you horrible stuff here.

Regardless of what the thread starter thinks or says, it doesn't make this any better. This is a professional forum. You never know who will read your posts.
Deathknight
05-25-2005, 03:30 AM
I have an advanced Diploma in Digital Animation and design. How bout you?
redogre
05-25-2005, 09:12 AM
You have a diploma along with a bad attitude, Cesar has this harsh way too.

This is a professional forum, critics are not personal, they are work based. I got very harsh critics here but I never responded to any thing like "oh is that so", I try to learn and get better.

I am a 28 year old architect and I still see myself as a noob. I learned lots of things here. Just relax, nobody is your enemy here, just put you attitude aside and once try to re render your work with the comments, you will see it gets better. I did....
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