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prithvi
05-15-2005, 04:25 AM
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Title: Space Corridor
Name: Prithvijit Sarkar
Country: India
Software: Maya, Photoshop

This is for a short sci-fi animated movie that we're attempting to make, as a team.

The scene has been modelled with Maya 5
Textures were made in Photoshop 7
Freshtone
05-19-2005, 07:55 AM
hmm no comments here ....

Well let me be the first then ;)...

The style is great but there is something slightly flat about the image. You should try to incorporate something in the scene that stands out a little more . Maybe adjust some of the textures in the sense to make it stand out more.

Also maybe work on the lighting a bit more and sort out something with a bit more atmosphere maybe ?. All in all im not getting the feeling i think you are trying to give here?. I thin also adding a slight bit more detail to the objects in the room.

Another small thing is the bump mapping and texture on the grill floor , maybe slightly change that and decrease the bump mapping slightly while working a little on the shader you use there.

All in all its great work .

keep up the great work man :)
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