cleptocat
10-10-2002, 05:15 AM
Hey everybody...a character sketch that was somewhat inspired by the new Unreal Tourney. Let me know what cha' think.
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PANZER
10-10-2002, 06:22 AM
erm.. to me, the thighs looked a little too big.
unless you intended tomake it so.:D
unless you intended tomake it so.:D
cleptocat
10-10-2002, 01:13 PM
I am a bit of a thigh man...but that wasnt the goal. I think I see where I can work that. Thx!
PANZER
10-10-2002, 03:27 PM
the guns are nice..
maybe you could make her thinnner and slimmer then she'll be a 'kick-ass'!! :applause: you did it what ? digital?
maybe you could make her thinnner and slimmer then she'll be a 'kick-ass'!! :applause: you did it what ? digital?
cleptocat
10-10-2002, 06:35 PM
Yeah its digital so it can be altered forever if need be.
cleptocat
10-11-2002, 03:05 AM
Tried thinning out the thighs a bit. Couldnt do much. Really should add some detail.....
PANZER
10-11-2002, 03:12 AM
nono... you really DID changed much! the update loooks really good! how bout makin the boobs less 'droppy'? (more pushed-up)? i think it'll look better..:wip:
Kirt
10-11-2002, 06:13 AM
I was going to comment on this yesterday, but didn't get to it. I like it alot, but it would look a lot better finished up. Here's a few things I can think of before you get to finalizing the image ...
The new thighs look 100% better, but the forward bulge on the right leg looks a little high. Try to picture her sitting or with the leg bent upwards to help visualize where the thigh muscle begins to bulge outwards from the leg.
The horned objects on her kneepads seem to be of different thickness or dimensions. If the intent was to mirror these objects then you need to adjust one of them a bit more.
Her left shin guard has an arc to it that curves outward from knee to ankle. But the other one seems to follow a straight center-line upwards. I think you put the arc there for style in her posture, but it really is confusing to the geometry of the boots.
The guns could use a bit of help with a ruler. Some lines there are pretty sketchy and curved. Which you usually don't see on machined metals.
Lastly, (don't know if this is due to the low cut in her shirt) her boobs are sagging. I know ... not all females have perky ones, but these are a little unflattering on an otherwise very fit female.
The new thighs look 100% better, but the forward bulge on the right leg looks a little high. Try to picture her sitting or with the leg bent upwards to help visualize where the thigh muscle begins to bulge outwards from the leg.
The horned objects on her kneepads seem to be of different thickness or dimensions. If the intent was to mirror these objects then you need to adjust one of them a bit more.
Her left shin guard has an arc to it that curves outward from knee to ankle. But the other one seems to follow a straight center-line upwards. I think you put the arc there for style in her posture, but it really is confusing to the geometry of the boots.
The guns could use a bit of help with a ruler. Some lines there are pretty sketchy and curved. Which you usually don't see on machined metals.
Lastly, (don't know if this is due to the low cut in her shirt) her boobs are sagging. I know ... not all females have perky ones, but these are a little unflattering on an otherwise very fit female.
cleptocat
10-11-2002, 03:22 PM
Thx much for all the crits. I tried out a couple more of the suggestions. The guns will have to wait until I get some real time.
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