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archerx
05-11-2005, 12:25 PM
Hello guys, my name is Olivier Archer and im 18 years old.
i would like to share my first short movie with you! took me a few month to make and im a bit nervous about posting it since its my first... so be gentle! :thumbsup:

http://www.archerx.com/AOS/images/scene5.jpg


also i made a website with a small overview of the process to help out all those who want to make a short movie! so there's a 2 for 1 combo there

anyways enjoy

http://www.archerx.com/AOS/ <---- Movie site with movie download :love:

http://www.archerx.com <---- my brand new site please visit :buttrock:

ok thanks for viewing and please exuse my shameless plug

mummey
05-11-2005, 12:31 PM
Hey archerx,

This should probably go in the Finished Work: Animation forum.
http://www.cgtalk.com/forumdisplay.php?f=154

archerx
05-11-2005, 06:57 PM
oh ok sorry...

anyways anyone have any comments about my short ?

thanks

pgp_protector
05-11-2005, 07:08 PM
20 Meg download, Hope you have a good Hosting Provider, you're going to get slammed on the bandwith.

lastchild7
05-11-2005, 08:28 PM
oh ok sorry...

anyways anyone have any comments about my short ?

thanks

i really like what you are showing here, i saw a few errors in the editing but i couldnt have done better. It was great keep it up

pgp_protector
05-11-2005, 09:25 PM
Few areas that need work

1) The way the person holds the gun when shooting, the wrist are at a real funny angle
2) The way they get on / off the bike needs work
3) The way the smoke/dust fades/starts on the bike is too abrupt.

But over looking good.

archerx
05-11-2005, 10:02 PM
thanks for the comments, please post more so that i don't make the same mistakes in future projects, because i have been looking at this so long alot of mistakes aren't so obvious to me.

thanks pgp_protector, i have 100gb monthly bandwidth so that should give about 5000 downloads, that should be enough i hope.

lastchild7, could you please tell me what the errors where ? so that i can learn from them.

plasmax
05-11-2005, 10:19 PM
Really not bad! Of course there are things to improve, but you would know them already.

My only real problem with it was the voices... cringeworthy.

Keep it up, in a couple months I hope to see a second, and even better animation!

archerx
05-12-2005, 10:23 AM
plasmax- thanks for the comments, about the voices... you get what you pay for (i paid nothing...) im starting a new short which will be completly different from this one, im gonna try and do something with humour. but in the future i would like to use these characters for a future short since i really like them, so their next episode will have a better story, better cinematography, better animation, better everything !

patrickkrebs
05-13-2005, 07:48 PM
That was Damn good for a first movie and damn good for someone 18.
It looks a lot like a Pre-vis. I can't wait to see what this kid does when he's 25.

archerx
05-14-2005, 08:35 AM
patrickkrebs - thanks, i got in 3d to make movies and tell my stories so hopefully in a few years i'll be in hollywood :D :buttrock:

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