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Maverick3d
02-15-2002, 05:09 PM
http://www.maverick3d.cjb.net/lowpoly1.jpg

1470 faces. Budget of 2000

mcaron
02-15-2002, 09:13 PM
Nice work so far! And nice stance in the side view, I like that.

As for criticism, how about raising the tip of the toes off the ground a bit? It tends to give a nice round feel to the foot and most shoes, if you look at them, are made this way. I would also rotate the thumb a tiny bit to the inside of the hand. Again, it looks more natural. It might be harder to skin afterwards but I think it might worth the effort.

So it's only details. Your character looks fine, can't wait to see it textured.

Maverick3d
02-19-2002, 03:31 PM
Mostly finished. A few skin issues left to fiddle with.

http://www.the-gunfighters.com/maveric/lowskinned2.jpg

thereverend
02-19-2002, 06:14 PM
Interesting...technique seems ok, but maybe the initial concept design is a little niave.

The combat textures give no impression of material folds, I think the leg looks more like a pirate stump than a cyber leg.

The face texture is out of context with the clothing, the 2 style need to be conformed.

Otherwise ok.
Cheers
The Rev


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