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0utlander
05-10-2005, 04:58 AM
Hey,
Im creating a short action scene for my postgraduate study at uni. Ive got a rough animatic out and i'd be great to hear some feedback on it. Note: at this stage there is NO TIMING in the shorts... im focusing on the camera postions and cuts atm. So scrub though it at your own pace :)

Additions: when camera goes "grey" for a bit the lights are going out on the train and hero is acting on this distration. Also at the end he has a grin on his face and it fades to black. just er.. imagine this as u watch :)

thanks :-)

http://members.iinet.net.au/~bennettc/animatic_web.mov (2 meg)

HellsAngel
05-11-2005, 05:28 PM
nice cuts.....i'd just probably change the first shot where he reveals his gun to a still frame low angle....and for the last shot where one of the bad guys points his gun...u could reveal that in the previous shot just with the gun entering the frame.....low on FOV....
looks nice so far...lookin forward to the full thing:)

0utlander
05-12-2005, 09:26 AM
cool idea with the FOV thanks!

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