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xiaoali
05-07-2005, 10:56 AM
I did this as a final for my introduction to video class, I was hoping I could get it critiqued here as well.

http://www.xiaoali.net/portfolio/section1/returntothepast.mov

It's roughly 22mb.

Thanks in advance.

igorsandman
05-07-2005, 12:01 PM
Hey,

Not bad at all. There is a reminisence of Fight Club which is fun. The photography also is quite good.
Some things bug me though. The framing is imaginative, but sometimes awkward. It's sometimes hard to tell what's the strong point of your picture, what we should focus at. I noticed another problem which is more important. You often break the line of the actors' eyes. It's particularly embarassing when you're doing close ups. We're confused at where the characters are and who is talking.
Anyways, Good job.
Keep it up.
-IS-

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