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Fish-KAart
05-06-2005, 04:26 PM
Alena Klementeva has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=7668)

Latest Update: Final Image: Masha final
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7668/7668_1116499778_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7668/7668_1116499778_large.jpg)

Masha and Reks are going to the next expedition at new unknown planet. But they have a great problem right now.
The problem is squirrel - firefly which was caught in last trip. It was so nice with Masha and Reks likes it too.

The restless squirrel - firefly crashed all devices in its room, include important devices of supporting life in ship.
Masha with Reks had to cage the poor thing and it has begun to miss. Masha was so concerned with that situation that she agreed to take squirrel -firefly to the next expedition is the planet condition will be acceptable.

The walk may turn animal to brighter mood and it lets to satisfy the squirrel’s curiosity. Reks will be responsible for the animal and he is concerned about that. Frankly speaking they have a special magnetic lead but it’s not enough to be sure that the walk will be successful.

Moreover they may find a new friend for it during walk, and a new valuable animal for a Moscow Zoo.

liiga
05-06-2005, 04:36 PM
Hey, welcome to the challenge! The time's running short, can you make it? *suspense suspense* Anyhow, good luck and have fun! :)

Fish-KAart
05-06-2005, 04:52 PM
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Hello!

Here are Masha and Reks.
Full name Maria Vasilievna Romanova was born at May,5 in Moscow. She is 23 years old.
She is pretty, smart, kind and very purposeful. She is that rare kind of girls which combine blonde hair anв sharp mind.
She lives with her parents and pet (pretty dog). She has graduated 2 Universities at faculties: bio-researcher and veterinary course.
She is working under thesis for a Doctor\\\'s degree. And moreover she has a really exotic profession - hunter
In long cosmic expeditions she hunts different exotic animals from faraway worlds. Her main duties are to find, catch, research and bring back to zoo galactic animals.
Instruments which are used by Masha are not too ominous: bow with anesthesia arrows, hypno gun, first-aid outfit (which encapsulated in her dress)
She has a dream to make the most interesting collection of animals in Moscow Zoo. She have chosen that job because she likes animals and most of them she loves Reks.
Reks loves Masha too. But sometime he doesn’t like her flash temper and her requirements. And most of all he hates her work dress. He is romantic lazy fellow, and a little bit nerd dog. Sometimes he feels blue and Masha always kiss his nose to make his mood more brighter
Also Reks is professional specialist and his help is very appreciated by Masha in catching and hunting wild animals.
Sometimes he helps to adopt them in new environment. And without any doubts he is the best Masha\\\'s friend.

So let the luck will be with our characters in their hard work:-)


Sorry for my English , it not perfect yet, but the bad English knowledge wasn\\\'t a reason to don\\\'t do my creations.

I will be waiting for your reply.

Best regards,
Alena.

NOOB!
05-06-2005, 04:54 PM
those r excellent pencils,more...and quick!!

Fish-KAart
05-06-2005, 05:03 PM
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Fish-KAart
05-06-2005, 05:13 PM
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Sorri I havent experience in posting

NOOB!
05-06-2005, 05:14 PM
looking excellent!

Fish-KAart
05-06-2005, 05:34 PM
Thanks for support

K_Apache
05-06-2005, 05:40 PM
[QUOTE=Fish-KAart]http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7668/7668_1115395994_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7668/7668_1115395994_large.jpg)

Girl with a Sad Armored Rabbit :-)
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Fish-KAart
05-06-2005, 05:47 PM
Thank you for your feedback... I try to proceed at the same way...:)

Mardukk
05-06-2005, 05:58 PM
This is looking very good. Good luck to you.

LexLe
05-10-2005, 09:29 AM
Your work has very much liked!
So to hold!
Successes!

Fish-KAart
05-12-2005, 01:28 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7668/7668_1115900901_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7668/7668_1115900901_large.jpg)

It is not final variant. Work above color. They fly in the space vehicle. Prepare for landing to other planet.

spacesnail
05-12-2005, 01:37 PM
Hello

nice work on the textures :thumbsup: and great colours too
I'm just a little worried with her right arm... i don't really know if it's misplaced of somthing like that ?

Anyway, keep it up :thumbsup::thumbsup:

dloots
05-12-2005, 01:40 PM
Very cool I dig the slave the most.

Good luck

Ilikesoup
05-12-2005, 05:52 PM
I like it, but I'm confused. Is the creature with her "Reks" or a captured, armored bunny? I figured that she was the master and Reks is the servant, but now I' m not sure. Can you explain? Also, though your characters look well painted the background looks very sharply detailed. Is the bg painted?

Jezzarts
05-12-2005, 06:10 PM
Cool pic, looks a little mismatch at the moment but I'm sure this will come together... love your concept drawings. :thumbsup:

Samuraikuroi
05-12-2005, 11:59 PM
Privet, Alena! I have'nt seen this at all till now. I love you drawings. And your painting is GREAT! very nice job! :thumbsup:

abourabe
05-13-2005, 06:42 AM
very nice work Alena and I wish good luck for you !

Belhaven
05-13-2005, 06:43 AM
hey man, awesome armor. your girl's got style, but the background seems... far too ctrl-t. it also seems very filter/layer effects... your girl looks very hand drawn and sewen with an artists hands, but the background seems hastily put together. i know time is short, but you can totally do it!!! try going back in with brushstrokes and define everything that is there with YOUR hand... it will really stand out if you do so. or at least it seems like that to me, hahaha. but good job man, good luck!

TheFirstAngel
05-13-2005, 07:19 AM
nice work alena. maybe smooth the transitions a bit, even thought, textures and details look great, it looks a bit like "pasted into that scene". my suggestion was to dim the light a bit and work over a shadow pass. reduce the light and you'll get more power into your scene, and things will as well fit together. the right foot(seen from the watcher), if you go for that perspective should move including knee a bit downwards, to keep the point of view. another option was to pick up the girls vanishpoint, and tweak the ground.
Keep up the great work, still 6 days to move on top your final polish. best luck and keep on rocking!

TMArtist
05-13-2005, 07:23 AM
Fish-KAart: Hey really nice image. I love the textures you created, especially in the background. My only crit is that I think you need to boost the contrast of the character a little. You can do this by adding some more shadow tones to the figure. Oh yes try taking some of the orange tones from the window scene and lightly adding some washover light onto the figure. This will help to bring it all together. I hope this helps. Best of luck!

Regards,

walrus
05-13-2005, 02:32 PM
This is looking nice, Alena. I like the character design for both the woman and the pet. Others have commented on the mismatch between foreground and background, so I'll agree without adding more about that. I just wanted to ask why the strong skew to the upper-right? I have to confess, it makes me a bit dizzy! I keep expecting the characters to slide off to the lower right.... Or at least be posed to fight from sliding! :-) Anyhow, no one else has commented on that so it's likely just me!
Good luck with the last week!

-mike

Fish-KAart
05-13-2005, 06:16 PM
Dear friends!!! Thank you veru mach!! !! For support and praises. And the main thing-for explanatory useful comments :) !! I Think-they to me very much will help!! :thumbsup: To you of success! :buttrock:

eparts
05-13-2005, 06:26 PM
aw, very cute pic. lovely style with rough textures and brushes :)
hmm. work on the color tone.. there are so many different colors and very chaotic put together, in my opinion. more orange pehaps.. to balance the window

keep up the good work

E.T
05-13-2005, 09:18 PM
i like it! keep it up!

Hof
05-16-2005, 08:21 AM
Beautiful work! I like the colours:thumbsup: The dog has great face expression :) Good luck ;)

Fish-KAart
05-16-2005, 02:08 PM
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The next version before the ending. I do not see mistakes-too long I look at work. I shall be glad to your advice. The fresh sight always sees misses is better.

Fish-KAart
05-16-2005, 02:12 PM
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It is not assured of sufficiency of quality..

Fish-KAart
05-16-2005, 02:19 PM
There was a desperate desire all considerably to alter. At absence of time. As I regret that so have late started to draw this theme! :scream:

Fish-KAart
05-16-2005, 06:05 PM
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Color naight

Fish-KAart
05-16-2005, 06:09 PM
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Color-day

Fish-KAart
05-16-2005, 06:15 PM
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Choice plise. Help mi, dia friends!

Kamjar
05-16-2005, 06:48 PM
Huh , havent seen your thread before.
But i love the image, the textures look superb!I like the character too.

I think i prefer the blue coloured one more. Because it looks like its a spaceship, in space. SO lue fits it more. :)

Cheers Kam

xric7
05-16-2005, 08:28 PM
nice characters.
and also coloring.
personally i prefer the blue color.because the brightness not too strong like the red one.
good luck.:thumbsup:

Miyagu
05-16-2005, 08:36 PM
the blue one! :thumbsup:

good luck! :)

JTD
05-16-2005, 10:50 PM
Personally, I like the golden reddish background but the blue background does lend itself better to the sorrowful look on the creature’s face.

AdrielaSakamoto
05-16-2005, 10:52 PM
I have to go with the blue tones. For some reason, the warmer version seems to have some of the midtone values dropped out or something. Otherwise, I'd probably be hard pressed, as both cool and warm toned images appeal to me equally. Much good luck with the challenge!

Adri

yznah
05-16-2005, 11:13 PM
the design of your character is really good. i like the armored stuff and all^^
that's a good contrast to make with a cute face
i prefer the blue one, maybe it is more related to space and all

liiga
05-16-2005, 11:23 PM
I prefer the blue one, it looks more spacy. The golden one is nice, too, but it just looks too washed out. Blue is more nostalgic and everything. :D

MaxLarin
05-17-2005, 08:52 AM
Great! I very much like your work. I would choose a warm variant of a colour score.

TheFirstAngel
05-17-2005, 09:01 AM
Hehhe, I am anyways loving blue, so (just my taste) i prefer the blue one, its sweet and "spacey"... great work Alena! best luck!

Fish-KAart
05-17-2005, 06:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7668/7668_1116350706_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7668/7668_1116350706_large.jpg)

Masha and Reks are going to the next expedition at new unknown planet. But they have a great problem right now.
The problem is squirrel - firefly which was caught in last trip. It was so nice with Masha and Reks likes it too.

The restless squirrel - firefly crashed all devices in its room, include important devices of supporting life in ship.
Masha with Reks had to cage the poor thing and it has begun to miss. Masha was so concerned with that situation that she agreed to take squirrel -firefly to the next expedition is the planet condition will be acceptable.

The walk may turn animal to brighter mood and it lets to satisfy the squirrel’s curiosity. Reks will be responsible for the animal and he is concerned about that. Frankly speaking they have a special magnetic lead but it’s not enough to be sure that the walk will be successful.

Moreover they may find a new friend for it during walk, and a new valuable animal for a Moscow Zoo.

Wish them a good luck in their funny adventures!!!

Fish-KAart
05-18-2005, 12:56 PM
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Here has tried to enter contrast colors in illumination..

Fish-KAart
05-19-2005, 11:49 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7668/7668_1116499778_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7668/7668_1116499778_large.jpg)

Masha and Reks are going to the next expedition at new unknown planet. But they have a great problem right now.
The problem is squirrel - firefly which was caught in last trip. It was so nice with Masha and Reks likes it too.

The restless squirrel - firefly crashed all devices in its room, include important devices of supporting life in ship.
Masha with Reks had to cage the poor thing and it has begun to miss. Masha was so concerned with that situation that she agreed to take squirrel -firefly to the next expedition is the planet condition will be acceptable.

The walk may turn animal to brighter mood and it lets to satisfy the squirrel’s curiosity. Reks will be responsible for the animal and he is concerned about that. Frankly speaking they have a special magnetic lead but it’s not enough to be sure that the walk will be successful.

Moreover they may find a new friend for it during walk, and a new valuable animal for a Moscow Zoo.

MDN67
05-19-2005, 11:54 AM
nice pic with a unique style, good work and good luck for the end

Fish-KAart
05-19-2005, 02:33 PM
Thanks! It was a pity-few to time.. :)

MaxLarin
05-19-2005, 05:37 PM
Very much it is pleasant to me! Rendering, color, the schedule - all super

Fish-KAart
05-20-2005, 06:00 PM
Thanks,Мах:) !

TheFirstAngel
05-21-2005, 03:59 PM
Congrats on your wonderfull final piece Alena! knew you'll make it! its a very funny story, and your style is very very lovely! best of luck on the final!

Morgy
05-22-2005, 12:57 AM
Kruto! Keep this style and develop it:applause:

jugeras
05-23-2005, 01:28 PM
congrats on your piece n gud luck :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Fish-KAart
05-24-2005, 06:24 PM
Dear friends!!! Thank you veru mach!! !! For support and praises. good lak to you too :) !!

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