Peoples
10-07-2002, 07:19 PM
No radiosity, 4 lights - best AA 2x2,8x8 - a bit grain is PS...I'm done for a while with these scenes. Getting bored..I think this is my personal best in this genre. Whaddya say - shoot:
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flingster
10-07-2002, 08:50 PM
slick....rick....erh sorry goodie peoples.
I think the mag cover needs to be more used looking, at the moment looks more like a tile than glossy paper. Also the side of the big glass needs to be smoother. If you look at it from range you can see the poly edge....but if you go close up it looks fine. apart from that fine. hope this helps
Whats the new topic then if youre giving up on still life?
I think the mag cover needs to be more used looking, at the moment looks more like a tile than glossy paper. Also the side of the big glass needs to be smoother. If you look at it from range you can see the poly edge....but if you go close up it looks fine. apart from that fine. hope this helps
Whats the new topic then if youre giving up on still life?
say-g
10-08-2002, 02:04 AM
nice :thumbsup:
you have alot of beverages there ;)
you have alot of beverages there ;)
bjotto
10-08-2002, 05:14 AM
The only thing I can see is that everything is so clean, you should make it dirtier, other than that fine.
Intresting reading:rolleyes: , you know swedish?
Intresting reading:rolleyes: , you know swedish?
AdamT
10-08-2002, 05:32 AM
Great except for the magazine cover. It looks like it's varnished into the table.
Erik Heyninck
10-08-2002, 08:37 AM
Me too I have the impression that the glossy magazine has no thickness because the reflection on the table goes straight ahead on the mag cover. If it were having a certain thickness, the reflection would go on from a slightly different place (that would be localised by the perspective).
Apart from that I am very impressed by the overall quality, and also by the composition: you give the idea of a photograph taken by accident which adds to the realism.
Apart from that I am very impressed by the overall quality, and also by the composition: you give the idea of a photograph taken by accident which adds to the realism.
Erik Heyninck
10-08-2002, 08:52 AM
Permit me to add this very simple image to show what I mean:
PureFire
10-08-2002, 09:05 AM
looks like a great magazine:eek: but it is maybe a little too shiny...
the rest looks sweet:beer:
the rest looks sweet:beer:
kiwi
10-08-2002, 10:24 AM
Nice :thumbsup:
It might just be my gamma but it looks like it needs a bit of overall contrast.Try an adjustment layer in PS to see if you like it with more contrast,if not chuck the layer as its non destructive :)
For the Magazine I would use a plane and I would work out the binding width then using the knife tool make a cut just outside your outer poly so that you can extrude the binding seperately from the rest of the cover,also some bevelling of edges might help as well :)
Stu.
It might just be my gamma but it looks like it needs a bit of overall contrast.Try an adjustment layer in PS to see if you like it with more contrast,if not chuck the layer as its non destructive :)
For the Magazine I would use a plane and I would work out the binding width then using the knife tool make a cut just outside your outer poly so that you can extrude the binding seperately from the rest of the cover,also some bevelling of edges might help as well :)
Stu.
ThirdEye
10-08-2002, 04:55 PM
http://www.liquid-arts.de/gallery/JD-01.htm
very good result compared to this masterpiece, I've got some doubts about the magazine and the glass, the rest seems ok :beer:
very good result compared to this masterpiece, I've got some doubts about the magazine and the glass, the rest seems ok :beer:
ggegan
10-08-2002, 06:23 PM
The magazine has an odd reflection on it. Also, why is the pic so grainy?
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