Gambit

[Pauluz]

looks real good but i think the face can use some more work

[powerACE]

hmmm i think you are quite right about the head i have updated my art and add some color in it
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/Phoenix_ACE/WIP/Gambit_WIP13.jpg

[magnetos]

waoo great pencil and colors so far , the only crit i have and i might be wrong its that his left arm looks a bit too long , also but its not a crit though the colored guy looks older ,but i guess that's the way you want it

keep posting :)

[BluePulse]

looks real good but i think the face can use some more work
It's great to have critiques like you've given, but, you should try and be more specific. If you were to recieve a critique like that, what knowlege could you expect to gain from it.

[powerACE]

waoo great pencil and colors so far , the only crit i have and i might be wrong its that his left arm looks a bit too long , also but its not a crit though the colored guy looks older ,but i guess that's the way you want it

keep posting :)

based on the anatomy i projected i think the arm is fairly long
http://www.geocities.com/ace_phoenix3d/images/gambitWIP04.jpg

about the new head i made it according to the projected angle, but i think it sa wrong giving non-constructive crits :)

[Thewipe]

cool , good diagrams for proportion

[magnetos]

nice perspective example right there phoenix :thumbsup: still i dont know something bothers me about that arm maybe its because the arm cuff or whatever is called has the same color of his skin <dark blue>
like your stuff post more :)

[dead pixel]

i like the coloured version, he looks older and meaner.
arnt the whites of his eyes ment to be black and the iris red? or is that only sometimes?

[powerACE]

i made an update, some says he is better look younger hehehe,...
i disagree that gambit's eyes is black its not realistic, but iris is red OK.
i will include storm and cyclops in the picture, here's a sample sketch...

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/Phoenix_ACE/WIP/gambitWIP15.jpg

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