finished 3d short 5 mins

[HenningK]

Hey that was neat. The character motion was pretty bad, but everything else was very very good, especially the cinematography and editing. I watched the whole way through... the music kept it interesting. Probably a lot of people wont be able to see past the rough animation though.
Small note: the night shot after the lepidopterist is walking back from the tree incident doesn't look like a night shot. Darker!
love,hen

[nickfranklin]

Hey thanks for the feedback.

The shot of after the tree scene when he is walking home is not supposed to be a nightshot....It is supposed to be evening. If you notice there is a sunset later on when the main character is back in the cave.

cheers

Nick

[ExKArt]

I liked this short. The monkey was a cool character.
Anyways I like how the scenes were set up, the only thing was the animation which was good if that's what you wanted, however I think the walk sequences and sneaking ones could be smoothened and improved. (I think that's the word) But who am I?
Just what I think, Im sure you know that.

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