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Raul3d 02-14-2002, 10:21 PM Please comment my work. Thank you.
http://the3d.ws/artists/raul3d/Render_Vray9.JPG
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model looks good ,need a little bit works on the render ,and can we see other angle,it will be more easy to critics ...;)
EighthDecay
02-14-2002, 11:50 PM
It looks like a pretty nice model,,, maybe not perfect far as the orginal goes,, the mirrors stand out too be a little finny too me,, and I'm not sure but the head lights could be a we bit bigger,, but modeling wise it looks well done,,, I wanta see more views of it,, the rear or it is my favorite,, I have one on top of my monitor,, but its got no top on it,,, so i have no clue as too what that looks like,,, maybe add a gap around that headlight lense,, it alwas seems too add a nice shadow or shine around it,, it will stand out more. great work on the hood,, that must have been some work,,
I also like those seats,, good stuff.
I just wanta see more views.... =D
did you also make to engine?
anyhoo
Lewis3D
02-15-2002, 02:45 AM
Model looks very good. Yes there is few issues with mirrors and maybe lights are too smal IMHO but overall very good. My nipick would be for rendering - CAR is floating :D.
goodlag
02-15-2002, 09:10 AM
i like it .looks good
FrageNSTEIN
02-15-2002, 09:47 AM
Well, i love cars, and that is definately an F50, tho i would pull the wheels out more horizontally, because the real F50 usually does not have such an overhang above the wheels.
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jornkk
02-16-2002, 10:08 PM
great model! I just love Ferrari ! my personal favourite is the f-40.
please make it ferrari red or black, not yellow :)
the reflections on the hood seems a bit strange to me to.
Raul3d
02-17-2002, 10:20 PM
Thank you so much for those opinions. I donīt use blueprints (I make it watching a model kit) to model and the model has some mistakes. Itīs true that the lights are to small and the car is floating (I make the render with VRay and I donīt undertand all the parameters).this model was my first attempt to make a realistic car.
http://the3d.ws/artists/raul3d/FerrariF50B23.jpg
http://the3d.ws/artists/raul3d/FerrariF50B20.jpg
http://the3d.ws/artists/raul3d/FerrariF50B21.jpg
http://the3d.ws/artists/raul3d/RenderC3.jpg
I think the modeling is pretty good, but not quite 100%
my biggest problem with it, is that the arc from the windshield
to roof is just to sharp, looks more like a truck than an exotic sports car!!!!! In fact MANY of the corners on the car are just
far too sharp, the real thing has much softer, rounder edges/corners.
Another thing that hurts the appearance, is the size of the wheel well, and the ground clearance, the real car seems to have larger gap between the top of the weel, and the wheel well(when looking from the side) and yet it still has a much smaller ground clearance. You would have to alter the body shape to fix this,
I would probably just make it hang a bit lower(dont wory about the wheel well, smaller wheel well sizes look better anyways, hehe)
Also move the wheels out for gods sake!!!
it looks like it's a bout to fall over!! Look at a picture of the wheel well, and match that. My 88 hundai XL doesnt even have wheel set that far in!!!(although it's close, hehe)
Go to www.ferrari-f50.com theres some good photos there.
KEEP AT IT, it is good work!
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