SPIRITUAL FIGHTING - Is On-line

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no replies yet??? this is great! you did this entirely yourself?

there are a few things that look a bit off... some of the motion graphics, the walking, etc... but overall this is game-cinematic quality work, and doing it all yourself is most impressive. bravo.

cant wait for more.

[DeathCry]

wow that all i can say!! u have some excellent detail on this work!! love how u did this, cant wait to see more to come soon!

[grury]

Wow well done dude, thats fantastic, well worth those 6 months of your life. Great editing and sound too.
Good luck with the rest of the episodes.

[Y-ota]

great!

Si vede che vieni da quella che è stata la più capace realtà in Italia!

[Amitaya]

never seen nothing of similar ... excellent

I want the next ... EPISODE II

:)

[snovak]

Ok you're obviosly very good at what you do, so you're going to get my professional opinion. Your modelling, texturing, and, compositing are all very good. I like how you take us from outside into the lair/base/whatever, it gives the animation the sense that there is a world out there. One of the things i have to crit is the meaning. It's called Spiritual Fighting. However, other than the audio script, I don't preceive a underlying story or anything that suggests a spiritual fight in anyway. As far as that goes, it's a nice display of what you're able to do visually. I think it would be far more compelling if you bring the meaning part of it into play.

Some other side notes (all just my opinion as above): I didn't realize that the radically shaking gun was materializing/equiping the gundam until I watched it 3 times.
During the electricution squence, the body is still a little still, while the arms shake looks good. The subtile animation during the head shot sequence is really nice, looks alive.

overall, really good stuff.

[skynight_01]

wow! ... "critiques are constructives to improving the short quality" :)

is right those you have said ...

Spiritual Fighting have a story subdivide in 3 chapters ... this ... EPISODE I ... want only to describe the world around to which the story has place and again only to introduce one of the two "characters".

This short has been synchronized with the "soundtrack" ... and for this reason ... some shots can appear "short" ... has been a choice to not lose "music's time" ... but overall ... this product is between "quality and time-production" ... all this alone in about 6 months

:) thx again

[CoreyJAvitar]

Really good looking models and everything!
The only crit I have is about the story, I was a bit confused.. But I am sure I will figure out more in later episodes.

Murphy

[skynight_01]

yes ... EPISODE I is inspired to Mary Shelley's romance ... Frankenstein ... and ... as I have said before this first episode want only to describe the world around the story has place.

It will be with EPISODE II that the story will begin to take a sense

and ... at now ... EPISODE II ... is "work in progress"

:)

download ... download ... download ... download ... :thumbsup:

[F R E U D]

only two words: BREATHLESS - SPEECHLESS
great ... excellent ... well done guy:bounce:

... can you give us some news about next episodes?

[Lempriz]

It looks great! :bounce:

[spiderlnk]

I am working for amination of gundam in Japan,You gave me some fresh ideas.I really like your espoides...wish more coming

[skynight_01]

I answer to spiderlnk:

... about story ... is top secret :thumbsup: ... simply why ... when all episodes will be completed ... directly to Siggraph ... (I prey god for this) ... and for this reason ... I'm changing (moreover) robot's style in order to avoid copyright's problem.

As before, I can only say that with Episode I ... I wanted only to describe the world around to which the story has place ... where the life begins ... as in Frankenstein ...

On my web site you can find a review on EPISODE I
For any question, you can contact me privately ... will be a pleasure :)

don't forget "rating" :thumbsup: :bounce: :buttrock:

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