Lil Girl, Ryan Benjamin (3D)

[xcvbnm]

The model looks good IMO.
You need higher res textures for such close up and a bit less saturated.
The trans maps on lashes are not working fine. You may add shadows and remove the blur in the corner of the eye.
Hope this helps :)

[ashen]

The modeling is nicely done and features are well balanced. In case you are going for realism it would definitely benifit a lot by adding details to the eyes; especially the white area which wouldn't be as bright at it is now. The skin shader can also be enhanced by desaturating it slightly. Overall nice work~

[PeterSanitra]

the shader is too saturated and you are missing the bump map(or tool low), you should show a bit of small variations in color(check my last pic)

[dixit13]

seem very nices to me!!! G8 work :thumbsup: C&C: bump needed

GoodDay!

[nathanwallis]

I am not an expert on anatomy, but to me the eyes see to flat with the heap, I feel that with some eyelids it would help define the shape more, rather than just seeming to end where the eyes start.

Nathan

[gagiu]

Good start. But you should have post it on WIP. Wxcept for what other sayed, she has no ears and quite a big portion of her head is missing (on the back side).
Keep up
tschus
gagiu

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