Master and Servant 2D Entry: Gábor Tamás

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Hey guys, i've never submitted a single entry on CGTalk, but i've been watching you for over a year now. The first site among the bookmarks in my browser. I hope I can grow up to the challange, though right now I can't imagine that I could pose a threat to your prizes. :) I only hope I can learn from you guys, much enough to create a piece of artwork that I can be proud of. To make things worse, I've nothing more to use, than the bundled software which came with my low-budget tablet. Now that's what I call a challange!

OK, the concept: This is just a quick sketch done in five minutes. I'm already working on a more accurate one, it takes time to finish.
The story: there's a military coup in some country. The former leader is under arrest. The painting shows him being taken into custody by a general, while the military takes over the presidential palace and secures the city. I think this is quite a dramatic moment, there can be lots of emotions, especially on the ex-pres' face.

Sorry for my bad english.

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Another quick sketch, made some changes. A handgun is pointed at the ex-leader's head. I think it feels quite bad, adding some more emotions and tension to the scene.

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Here's a little study on a handgun for the image.

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I started working on the background. As I am not that good at characters yet, I decided to create the background and the characters separately.
C&C are most welcome.

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Here's another sketch, I think this is the best so far, but PLEASE, tell me something. I haven't got a single comment from you so far, this is soo bad. :( Tell me I better be a baker or something.

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Come on, i could really use your help. Am i heading the right way? Say something, guys. Thx.

Here's the final concept. I guess it's final, unless you have some suggestions.

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hey Tommy!

Az ötlet nem rossz, az anatómián még dolgoznunk kell egy kicsit, nemde? ;)
Na akkor vigyázz, kész, rajztáblához, rajt!


peace, pete

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Nem akartam anatómiailag korrektre, csak lefirkáltam hogy mi az elképzelésem, és vártam a reakciókat. Végre akadt egy. :D Hamarosan elkezdek dolgozni egy korrektebb modellen, és a világítást is megváltoztatom, teljesen, mert ez dög unalmas.

Yeah, these are just some quick sketches, i didn't draw for realism or perfection, just wanted you to see, what my idea is. I will start a more accurate drawing soon (right now I'm designing the tank in the background. And I will try to create a nice lightning too.

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Today I've downloaded The GIMP, thought I should try something new. I couldn't imagine it was such a great program. :)
The last couple of days I've been sketching and sketching, and also made some studies. This is the one i created with the GIMP. This is gonna be the ex-leader's face expression. What do you think? I need some feedback, so your comments and critics are greatly appreciated.

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