Jump: A really short film

[mattmos]

Lovely work as per... The poses are stronger than your last piece and the curves are obviously well massaged :) nice arcs and weight throughout.

The main problem I have with this piece is the difference in attitude between the point where he sees the balloon and the run after it - he doesn't seem to think about catching the balloon when he first sees it, feels like the head movements should be a bit quicker - maybe he makes a grab for the balloon and misses, forcing him to run after it.

You're really knocking them out, good job!

[Andini]

If you don't mind my asking...what was that music? I liked it.

[Dark Prince]

That was awesome. I really enjoyed it. Good work! ^_^. Even though it was really short, I would also have to ask what that music was, if you don't mind of course.

[ivanisavich]

The music is a 15 second no-name track I got off a royalty free music CD of mine.

Thanks for the crit mattmos...I see your point.......maybe I'll have him reach for it before he stands up...help to better give off the idea that he wants it :).

[ROWAN]

cool little short man the slide back before he runs is nice :)

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