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10-02-2002, 12:22 AM
this is the antagonist from a futuristic pirate like-animation short that I have been working on. next step animation.
10-02-2002, 12:23 AM
Too busy IMO~
10-02-2002, 09:17 AM
the image is a bit too dark to really be able to tell anything.... i know its been overused but sticking him in a skydome with final gathering might do him some good..
10-02-2002, 06:21 PM
I thin it could really benifit from an overal color scheme.
Right now you have a lot various colors, that almost come off, clownigh ya know?
The brown and gold are looking nice, try carrying that through a little more.
The comment about being to busy could be fixed by just giving alittle thought to color choice, just my opinion. you have a pretty strong looking model here, and I think with a little work it could be really strong.
It would be nice to see awires or flat simple smooth shaded version to.
10-02-2002, 07:37 PM
I agree with King Mob, a little continuity with the colours would be great.. it looks like he robbed an old lady's closet, or got into a fight with a 3 members from cirque du soleil
10-02-2002, 10:02 PM
thanks for the comments.
I will try to pull together the colors a little. A scheme of some sort would definately help him out a little.
here is a wireframe and a simple shaded version.
10-02-2002, 10:11 PM
10-02-2002, 10:33 PM
You Go Boy!
:airguitar :buttrock: :buttrock: :beer:
10-03-2002, 12:39 AM
I tried to rework some of the colors. Not real sure whether it's any better now though
10-03-2002, 03:32 PM
LEts get a close up of that LEG. Is that FUR? :drumrock:
10-03-2002, 11:47 PM
nice work on muscle detail but the cloth and hair need work.
10-05-2002, 02:33 AM
the pirate seems to lack the futuristic element
10-05-2002, 02:38 AM
actually that's true, Looks like the eye patch has some sorta eye beam thingie, but maybe you could embeligh it, add some wacky tech on his hook or sumptin.
01-13-2006, 06:00 PM
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