Master and Servant 2D Entry: tobias witek

[toobi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7382/7382_1113259616_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7382/7382_1113259616_large.jpg)

the idea was to put the master in a more passive position and let him act through his apprentice who is trying to turn the two small "troll" servants into a big one. he is doing it by the book with little success so far as seen in the left backround. here you can see how he already failed two times in combining them.
please tell me what you think of the perspective and composition. do you like the characters? all comments are more than welcome ...

[Cerebr4l]

Nice concept, very cool. Welcome to the competition!

[NOOB!]

looks excellent!

[Olithys]

Nice work !
Looks like funny and serious at both time.

[toobi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7382/7382_1114023328_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7382/7382_1114023328_large.jpg)

here's my cleaned up line art. its very detailed, only because i wanted to save some time in the coloring process. i'm very slow with that stuff but i'm looking forward to do it.
please send me your comments and critic.

[Jack Youngblood]

Yes you are right. Very detailed line drawing. Mmmm nice. Can I say that the steps in front don't immediately read as steps? This might be solved when you colour the image. Or you might also consider putting one of the feet of the front figures onto the step.


My Challenge Response (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?p=2201241#post2201241)

[toobi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7382/7382_1115240417_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7382/7382_1115240417_large.jpg)

this is my first and second coloring step. defining the colors and adding some shadows. i think i will change the color composition a bit and add more grey tones. next step will be the lightning concept. thanks for your comments.

[toobi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7382/7382_1116112812_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/7382/7382_1116112812_large.jpg)

oh man, time is running up! i don't know if i will make it in time. there are so many undone parts in the image and yet no lightning. the truth is i'm still far too slow and unexperienced. thanx for your nice comments.

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