Master and Servant 2D Entry: chong kok keong

[Tasty-K]

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Hi, my 1st challenge post. Tho i'm a bit, late, i'll try my best anyway. here i just made some doodles as the concept and story is developing still.

[G-hand]

thats some quality sketching, maybe you would want to explain a bit about the story behind it, whats the connection with the characters, cant wait to see more....

[Tasty-K]

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hi guys,just another sketch,thanks alot g hand,i'll post the story tonite.
comments and critiques appreciated.

[Tasty-K]

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Tis is a story about Alynne the elf, Hashkar the shaman and the her loyal people of fairies.
Alynne always has a talent in her. Or rather a mysterious hidden force in her that she herself doesn't realize it. She felt it but just doesn't quite make sure of her powers whether they were meant for good cause or the bad. The aura that her subconscious mind projected gives out negative influences to her surroundings. Shunned away by her people in her village, she ventured out and found a fairy settlement that she thought she would stay for the time being.
As always, her powers affected the settlement and the fairies around her. But it seems the fairies were somehow attracted to her. NOt only were they not feeling insecured around her, they offered her hospitality and treated as if she is their own. Some would even go as far as to ask for her blessings and good sayings for them and the settlement.Somehow...her powers had made her godlike to there fairies, and she really like to stay like this.
Not faraway in a desolate plain lives a powerful shaman, Hashkar. As Alynne's inner powers grew, he sensed it more and more everyday. Its the mysterious force thats twisting the balance of nature more and more out of control and its a disturbing matter for the shaman. He sets out to find the source of the power and hopes bring it under control, whoever or whatever is drawing from the powers.
In this painting, i'm gonna show where the shaman finally found her in that settlement, with her loyal fairies standing ready to do battle, or what appears to be defending her from any imminent danger, in this case, from the shaman. He wanted warn her about her powers becoming out of control if this keeps up. The problem is her new "soldiers" just
doesn't welcome this stranger into their land. The once serene and peaceful fairies are involuntary serving their new
dark elf master.
i'll come up with another composition sketch later.will be making fairies as her servants:)

[Tasty-K]

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rough color key...

[Tasty-K]

just wondering if there's something wrong about my entry..its been awhile and there's no replies to this thread.i seriously need some feedbacks as well as comments:)thanks guys

[DelanoyaR]

Good concept and sketches but i think you have to work more faster.

[Zephyri]

Hi Tasty! There's nothing wrong with your post by any means! Try getting around a bit in this forum and posting on other people's work, and you'll probably find they return the favour. As far as the concept goes, I like the story you've posted with it. Perhaps you could have the fae guards clustered round the elf woman a bit more, have a few more guards hinted at round the edges, if they see her as godlike, they'll likely protect her heavily and perhaps they could be in different positions, a couple crouching, or perhaps with bows? I'm not sure how the elf woman feels about this stranger turning up to warn her of her powers... she looks a little pissed off, does she know that she's warping the fabric of nature with her magic and is annoyed that he's trying to stop her? Or if she's not aware, would she be more in shock at this stranger breaching her inner sanctum? Just some thoughts.

I really like the backlighting behind the shaman, and the way he's elevated in the composition, gives a nice sense of tension and an impending battle. I really like the story and concept, you've obviously thought about it in detail. Keep going with it, it shows some real promise.

[Tasty-K]

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guys,here's another piece i tried ,testing on colors.i've changed the servants to fairies.

[fooxoo]

I like the latest one, good lighting, good characters (interesting poses), I think it has potential. Good luck!

[kornel]

Great beginning! Nice colors and elegant fieries...

I'll keep my eyes on you

cheers: Kornél

[calisto-lynn]

nice things goin on! i love the fearies!:thumbsup:

[Vectorius]

good concept... nice work! keep going on this way..i'll come back see evolution:)

[kornel]

Gorgious colors!!! congrats!

best regards: Kornél

[jeromoo]

Be careful with you concept. I don't think elves or faeries count as humans. The rules said there should be at least one PURE human for either master or servant. Also, there is no apparent master and servant relationship between the two subjects in your painting because they look like they are declaring war on each other, or just happen to spot each other for the first time, or the faeries are on high alert for those bad elves.

[jugeras]

yup. waiting for more definition. will be back. cheers.

[calisto-lynn]

beautifull atmosphere!:thumbsup:

[Arc80]

I must say, very nice. Love the colours and the lighting. It's a very nice atmospheric and mood piece. Reminds me of an old photograph. Be checking again later. :thumbsup:

cheers

[Tasty-K]

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i'm very late,made some touch up on the details.hope i could make it on time.
thanks for all the comments and feedbacks:)

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